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[Supernatural]: Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silence

Apr 14, 2012 21:44

Title: Let All Mortal Flesh Keep Silence
Fandom: Supernatural
Prompt: From checkthemargins at ohsam here.
Summary: Sam's back. He's in one piece. That's the problem.
Warnings: self-mutilation, hellferences, random use of Latin
Notes: In which, once again, my attempts at both slash and hurt/comfort turn out way more horror than either. Oh dear. Still, sick of staring ( Read more... )

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Comments 18

ephemerall April 15 2012, 12:42:52 UTC

Holy. fucking. shit. This is one of the most amazing things that I have ever read -- one of your best, for sure. Goddamn, that was creepy and yet somehow...it was right. Jesus, that's haunting and amazing and I *flail*.

This -- this right here is a new favorite, and so going in my mems.

minviendha April 19 2012, 02:13:42 UTC

Oh gosh. Thank you so much! I'm terribly flattered. >> I'm glad you liked this one! It felt a little weird while I was working on it.

Thanks for commenting!

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minviendha April 19 2012, 02:13:55 UTC

Thank you!

too quiet auroramama April 16 2012, 01:41:34 UTC

Bless him and keep him, I bloody well hope. Sam coping is scarier than most people freaking out. So very reasonable... I hope its enough.

Re: too quiet sylvia37 April 17 2012, 06:59:45 UTC

It's just so damn reasonable. I love how Sam is so calm trying to explain it, and I feel his frustration with Dean not getting it, LOL. Like it should will all just be fixed if you just let him do this. Amazing.

Re: too quiet minviendha April 19 2012, 02:14:54 UTC

Sam coping is scarier, which is what makes me enjoy writing it so much, augh. Because yes, he's so perfectly reasonable and so completely unaware of how fucked up he really is. Which just makes it hurt more.

...tl;dr thank you for commenting!

spnshannanigans April 18 2012, 03:54:53 UTC

“I’m sorry, Dean,” he said. “I know it’s not…what you want. But I’m not meant to be whole anymore.”

This line killed me! I'm not at all into Wincest, so it was nice that you encapsulated it at the end. Well done you!

minviendha April 19 2012, 02:15:43 UTC

I can only write Wincest on Fridays. Or when it is horror-tinged. Is the real reason. XD

Thank you for pulling out that line! I love it when reviewers do that. That line is one that really sums up this whole mess, isn't it?

Thank you for commenting!

sinka April 18 2012, 15:07:50 UTC

Oh, man. This fucking HURTS! This is painful and creepy and what makes it even worse is that THIS is real. This is 100% Sam ( ... )

minviendha April 19 2012, 02:20:40 UTC

As I just said in that meme - Sam is understatement. Sam is downplaying and letting just enough out to get away with keeping the rest quiet. And yes, yes, what I find most painful about this Sam is that he does firmly believe what he's saying, that this is just normal, this is just how things are, and the thing is that he's so good at making it sound true because he believes it himself. His mindset is, like, "well, yeah, it's too bad, but this is just the way things are, so it's okay" and there is so much wrong with that considering where he is. And yesss, it is at least partially (in my head) because that is what Lucifer would do, twist Sam around and convince him that everything was for the best. I have written this fic already ( ... )