SPN FIC - Savior (Part 1 of ?)

Jul 31, 2013 14:55

She stopped by the sheriff's station just to say howdy to an old friend.  Had no idea there'd be a four-foot-tall perp sitting there, ready to go ballistic.

CHARACTERS:  Ellen (age 28), OCs, and one 8-year-old boy
GENRE:  Gen
RATING:  PG
SPOILERS:  None
LENGTH:  1282 words

Savior (Part 1) )

wee!dean, bill harvelle, au, savior, jo, ellen

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elliejane July 31 2013, 23:24:51 UTC
You had me wonderIng, actually, if this really was Dean (as was my knee jerk assumption) and whether this was a different random kid who was Ellen's intro to hunting. But the brother / father combo at the end makes me go back to my original thought, and really that coiled spring just screams Dean. Love the tension in the scene, with Ellen her calm no nonsense self. Another assumption: there's more to come?

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ficwriter1966 August 2 2013, 00:08:14 UTC
Pretty transparent, huh? I did deliberately leave it vague at first, to see what people would take from it.

Part 2 is up. More to come, as time allows. :)

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gypsy_atavari August 1 2013, 00:46:06 UTC
Awwww, heartbreaking. Love Ellen here and how she just knows what to do. And dean, so hopeless.

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ficwriter1966 August 2 2013, 00:08:31 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it. And Part 2 is up...

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borgmama1of5 August 1 2013, 03:14:36 UTC
I think I'm supposed to believe this is Dean...and it is therefore cruel and unusual punishment for you to stop there!

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ficwriter1966 August 2 2013, 00:08:49 UTC
You do, huh? *g*

Part 2 is up!

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irismay42 August 1 2013, 22:12:35 UTC
Guh! Ellen! And Foster!Kid!Wee!Dean! Guh! Must read next part........

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ficwriter1966 August 2 2013, 00:09:05 UTC
Sounds like there's some flailing going on!!

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phebemarie August 2 2013, 00:52:11 UTC
I knew it was Dean when he managed to cause chaos with the hot chocolate.

Yep, those last few sentences were heartbreaking. I can almost see the tears on his ridiculously long eyelashes. :)

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ficwriter1966 August 3 2013, 17:17:54 UTC
Poor Dean, he's got a bad rep!

Glad you liked it. :)

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