What does no 8 say? The words look like sing-along song lyrics to that one, and I like it...it fits. The cried in 15 though, looks like fried. Pretty but hard to read.
Overall, me likes. In 14/15 her face seems to be in shadow, and her shoulder is in the light...it distracts my attention some. But again...they look quite nice, Devie.
haha, number 8 says "I am a rock, I am an Island." and Number 7 says, "It is Laughing and loving we destain." And I never noticed the Cried/Fried but that is interesting.
I am really not sure about what you are talking about in number 14/15 about her shoulder though. You mean the smokey figure of her and her old boyfriend she is looking at?
I guess it's 13/14...lol, my numbers were off. Maybe it's just the lighter writing...I wonder what it would look like if the face were made lighter/brighter. Not much, just a little. I can't really see the boyfriend.
Your right, I guess it is a little too dark. Here is a close up of what I am talking about. I am not sure if you have seen Hercues or not but Meg was working for Hades because her boyfriend died and she became Hades' to make him alive again. Then as soon as he is alive, he dumps Meg for someone else. Hades brings up that painful moment to her in the movie,recreating in smoke figures.
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Overall, me likes. In 14/15 her face seems to be in shadow, and her shoulder is in the light...it distracts my attention some. But again...they look quite nice, Devie.
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I am really not sure about what you are talking about in number 14/15 about her shoulder though. You mean the smokey figure of her and her old boyfriend she is looking at?
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