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[fidgetysue]

Here is the first draft of my one-quarter experimental film script. Subject to major changes. All comments are greatly appreciated, as I often have trouble evaluating my own work. (but really, who doesn't?) Sorry that the formatting's off.

Comments

[crazygerad]

*scratches head* I can't help with grammar error's but I can tell you I don't see the point if there is supposed to have any. I suppose everyone is to be dead except those two.

[fidgetysue]

oh, there's a point. Pretty much everything in the film is symbolic and not meant to be taken literally, which is maybe what's confusing to you.

Thanks for the feedback, though.

[lukerson59]

Chicken.

[fidgetysue]

not helpful, not funny.

[lukerson59]

You an have the chicken be symbolic.

[lukerson59]

can*