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[fidgetysue]

At the suggestion of Ryan (and, really, something I was debating doing earlier), I am posting the lastest draft of the script to my two-quarter film. It may seem long, but that's largely a formatting issue... it's around 9 script pages, so it ought to be a pretty quick read (seven minutes or so

Comments

[quintanacanroll]

I like it. It's cute, it's fun, and most important it's a film with your little sister in it that will actually make sense this time around.

[quintanacanroll]

I could have given you feedback in class, but instead I wanted to leave in the middle so I wouldn't have had to hear about the stupid "OMG I'M SO DEAF IT SUCKS SO MUCH TO BE AS DEAF AS I AM!!" play. Alas, I failed at this endeavor anyway.

[mikberly_gonle]

I like it! It's probably the cleverest script that has stoners, lizards, and a dissatisfied indy girl that I have ever read. Plus, it has your little sister in it, and she's adorable.

[mask_of_hex]

The stoner dialogue could use some work: something is missing, though I cant put my finger on it. I can offer advice, if you want.
Other than that, seems cool.

[hrtrat]

I like your use of the word "chillax."

Furthermore, there is a location known to all inhabitants of Reston, Virginia and the surrounding towns known as "McTacoHut," which for decades has been home to a triumvirate of fast-food favorites. Therefore I like your use of the phrase Taco Hut.