The Chronicles of New Zealand - Chapter 51

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[verangel]

I ABSOLUTELY ADORE THIS CHAPTER!!! Its so incredibly perfect. Its a perfect 1st year anniversary. The beginning and Elijah's having to speak first and the knowledge he had of what his and Dom's relationship could do if spoken about. I think right now it adds to their relationship in a wicked, private, way. Elijah staring at Dom's arms *sighs*. The wine and Dom watching Elijah and how beautiful he is *double sighs* was intoxicating to me. Their passion for each other is so strong and I loved remembering how Elijah was in the beginning but how I felt he is now and how strong. It was incredbly HOTHOT and erotic.
You so gorgeously fleshed them out (literally too).
I have missed this and was thinking about it the other day. I really loved every bit, every word, every kiss and more. Hugs you close and hope there will be more. xooxoxox love v

[fienchen]

Thank you so much for your always amazing feedback, hun!
It's really important to me to make clear the difference between the beginning and now and the character development, especially concerning Elijah. I think both he and Dom and wonderfully complex characters that can go through various interesting developments. And seeing how they'be both different and alike in many ways makes it even more interesting to write them as a couple.
Thanks again! We're nearing the end, but I'm planning a sequel. :)

[moffel83]

Now this was worth the wait:)

Don't we all like Dom's arms?*lol*

Thanks for updating. Can't wait for the next part. And we're nearing the end!*yippie* Go you!

[fienchen]

Thank you! Two more chapters at the most, plus epilogue. I'm looking forward to the sequel!

[moffel83]

I am looking forward to it as well. Can't wait for you to start covering that interesting time. It will be great to see it in your interpretation with your great writing:)

[fienchen]

Thank you!