This was so lovely and I almost got teary myself a few times.
And this...Their lips moved slowly against each other, one tongue slipping and sliding against the other. Elijah wrapped his arms tightly around Dominic’s neck and sank deeper into the kiss as Dominic responded by weaving his fingers through Elijah’s hair and pulling his face even closer. The moment could have continued forever, but they both knew it was time.
"Keeping his mouth right by Dominic’s ear, Elijah whispered: “You’re already a good person, Dommie. The best. I love you so much.” Then... "His arms tightened their hold around the slender frame of Elijah’s body. He knew if he pulled back now, he would not be able not to kiss Elijah deeply and passionately."
I could *feel* the passion and intense love pouring through these moments. I loved every bit of this chapter. The words described the scene perfectly as I have watched many times. It was hard because I wanted them to give in to their passions and kiss in front of everyone, but they couldn't, which is sad. Beautiful chapter. I really love this story so I am glad there is an epilogue. Hugs tight! xooxoxo v
Honestly, there is nothing repetitive here. It is genuinly thought out and very real. You wove the real event (switched time frame ok) with what you knew we have all seen and then gave the behind the scenes with them. After all they have been through and grown from, it was perfect. It was like revisiting for real and they were thinking just as you wrote. I really loved Elijah taking control of his Dom and kissing the anxiety away. I really have loved this story. hugs you xoxooxo v
Personally I'm really fed up with all the happiness and schmoopiness now and I kind of can't believe people still read it lol. But that will end in the sequel.
:( can't there be angst with them fighting together and schmooping? I do like both but there is something about having learned and keeping strong from it and dealing with it together , with lotsa great sex of course, that is soothing and real also. You will follow your course. xoox v :)
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And this...Their lips moved slowly against each other, one tongue slipping and sliding against the other. Elijah wrapped his arms tightly around Dominic’s neck and sank deeper into the kiss as Dominic responded by weaving his fingers through Elijah’s hair and pulling his face even closer. The moment could have continued forever, but they both knew it was time.
*happy sighs*
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One more little epilogue and then it's hopefully on to the sequel soon.
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"His arms tightened their hold around the slender frame of Elijah’s body. He knew if he pulled back now, he would not be able not to kiss Elijah deeply and passionately."
I could *feel* the passion and intense love pouring through these moments. I loved every bit of this chapter. The words described the scene perfectly as I have watched many times. It was hard because I wanted them to give in to their passions and kiss in front of everyone, but they couldn't, which is sad.
Beautiful chapter. I really love this story so I am glad there is an epilogue. Hugs tight! xooxoxo v
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Loved this chapter so much-all of it from beginning to end:)
You really did a great job with this story!
Can't wait for the epilogue and the sequel. So excited!
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Personally I'm really fed up with all the happiness and schmoopiness now and I kind of can't believe people still read it lol.
But that will end in the sequel.
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