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moffel83 September 5 2011, 00:57:15 UTC
You finished it:)

Loved this. Every bit of it and can't wait for part 2. The story was just amazing and the epilogue was perfect!

Thanks so much for writing this and sharing it with us:)

*hugs*

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fienchen September 5 2011, 12:19:53 UTC
Thanks. Creating a new banner for the new story is fun :)

I hope I'll get started on it soon

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lijahlover September 5 2011, 02:36:07 UTC
What a truly gorgeous story and an absolutly perfect epilogue.

But when Elijah began to smile, everything lit up again, and Dominic smiled right back at him. Mmmm yes everything will lit up when Elijah smiles :)

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fienchen September 5 2011, 12:45:08 UTC
Thank you!

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verangel September 5 2011, 10:37:17 UTC
oh gosh *sniff* I don't want them to leave. This was a lovely ending and I could feel their love and desire to stay there in their little world, void of hiding and harsh reality. hugs you and thank you...it was a wonderful journey with them. xooxoxoxox v

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fienchen September 5 2011, 12:46:45 UTC
Thank you, it really was. But it's time to move on now. Into the sequel lol

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blonddemon February 7 2012, 03:44:40 UTC
I just finished reading this. It is a wonderful story.

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fienchen February 8 2012, 16:50:12 UTC
Thank you, I'm currently working on a sequel.

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blonddemon February 8 2012, 19:20:09 UTC
I look forward to reading it.

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anonymous March 16 2013, 07:01:56 UTC
Hi.. I don't know if you're still getting/ reading reviews, but I wanted to let you know that I read this story a few months ago, and I keep coming back to it! I've never had such a physical emotion with a story. I loved it so much! I cried and laughed and felt angry... Oh my god, this is the best fan fiction I've ever read! And I've read a lot.
When I think of this story, I get giggly and I even tear up, because it's so beautiful!!! <3 <3
I just wanted to let you know, I will read this story and come back to it through out my life, because I love it that much and I spent hours reading it.
Keep writing stories! Because you're an amazing writer!

From Zoe.

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fienchen March 18 2013, 19:16:23 UTC
Wow, thank you very much for the great feedback! *hugs*

I started the sequel some time ago, no idea when that will be finished ;)

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