Comments | fierce_desea: Reveal (Shannon/Boone), NC-17

fierce_desea

Reveal (Shannon/Boone), NC-17

Mar 04, 2006 22:00

Title: Reveal ( Read more... )

Comments 12

fashionasassin7 March 5 2006, 03:03:23 UTC

that was really good! you should continue!

fierce_desea March 5 2006, 12:03:55 UTC

Thanks. I kinda want to continue, but I already have too many WIPs as is.

boones_babe March 5 2006, 07:17:51 UTC

That was great, i loved the last few lines!!!

fierce_desea March 5 2006, 12:05:25 UTC

Thanks!!! :)

msmith4815 March 5 2006, 10:05:01 UTC

Ah, smut. It must be my lucky day. Loved it. Hehehe.

fierce_desea March 5 2006, 12:06:18 UTC

It must be your lucky day, Mari. :D And thanks!

grapeseed March 5 2006, 11:04:02 UTC

Great job, I really liked it.

fierce_desea March 5 2006, 12:07:20 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

darkladydisdain March 5 2006, 19:15:48 UTC

It was amazing, Kat! My favorite line was "He slid himself inside her slowly, teasing her like she teased him over the past decade, so it felt." That's so Shoone.

I liked how it was hot without being trashy at all. Great job!

fierce_desea March 5 2006, 20:56:08 UTC

Thanks!!! I'm glad that you liked it (and I had no idea you had a LJ...adding :D).

Again, thanks. I was definitely trying to make it hot without being trashy. I've been trying to do that for awhile. I have learned from the best, especially on LiveJournal, foxxcub's work.