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[fiercenailbunny]

Dearest,

My asad, I recreated my website. This was actually from a couple of days ago. Please please please comment on the writing or what you think or anything

http://web.mac.com/kerynstewart/iWeb/Site/Dreamscape.html

Yours in Letters

Comments

[isogon]

I selected at random and picked "Mockery", which I really liked. The pepper spray was wonderful. I thought it got a little muddied in the second stanza, but it could be that I'm just too tired to be reading poetry. At any rate, I picked it up again at the end of the third stanza. Will have to read more when classes aren't looming.

The website looks really nice. Very professional. I love the integrated use of pictures, and the heading font is perfect.

On the 'Sleeping' page, there's a word missing from the sentence, "I believe that I cannot understand true happiness unless I known suffering."

Good job, looks really cool.