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Jan 02, 2009 22:43



When Geng was sixteen, he saw her.

She was beautiful. She had long, black tresses, eyes that reflected the stars above, a soft, gentle smile that left men breathless and speechless and a voice; she had the most wondrous voice! And the way she moved, elegant, graceful, like a swan gliding in a pool of water.

When Geng saw her, he was smitten. He had ( Read more... )

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superbmushroom January 5 2009, 15:00:48 UTC
;_;
poor Hannie; it must be really hard for him; his lover sacrificing her life for him, yet it is the purest love of all. :DD I'm glad he had decided to move on so that he can meet Shiwon and have Heechul stuck with him
And, Shichul is not going to go easy on him isn't it?

keke
can't wait for more!

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fifteen_half January 7 2009, 14:55:22 UTC
hahaha! of course that's the reason why XD fate brings the three together XD

more soon! thanks for reading!<3

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danceinthedark January 5 2009, 16:02:38 UTC
ahgdahafdn Sad YeonHan ;o; Though secretly, I'm glad it was her that died for once, not him, even if Timeless and Left Shore are completely separate to this. That girl brings death with her wherever she goes ;o; Still sad sad that two apparently deeply in love couples have been ripped apart in the run of this fic so far u.u

I suppose Shiwon's reaction really isn't the ideal one for Geng. If Shi and Chul had it their way with their current states of mind, I suppose he'd always be the middle man, talking back and forth for him >.> And that would suck.

Interesting interesting; looking forward to the next chapter ^^

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fifteen_half January 7 2009, 15:00:49 UTC
Haha! Come to think about it, it's true. Yeonhee does bring death.XD

I'm glad you still this interesting! Thank you so much for reading!<3

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volatileflame January 5 2009, 16:24:12 UTC
you make me so happy and so sad all at once T^T

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fifteen_half January 7 2009, 15:02:46 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it!<3
(true, gaiman's a genius)

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svtstarlight January 5 2009, 19:11:10 UTC
Awwwwwwwwww, so heartbreaking. :( *very sad* And I kind of had the feeling that it wasn't gonna be that easy with Siwon and Heechul. *sighs* Poor boys...

<3333333 Can't wait for your next chapter. <3

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fifteen_half January 7 2009, 15:07:05 UTC
*tries to mend your heart* XD
It's hard, I guess, for a loved one to be taken away so suddenly. You'd probably want to be with him or her as long as you possibly can. Even when it means taking advantage of someone, sometimes. D:

I'm glad you're still reading this! Thank youuu!<3

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svtstarlight January 8 2009, 18:27:03 UTC
Oh of course. I wouldn't miss it for the world. *loves this story even tho it's so sad*

*feels bad for them all tho* That Heechul even has to take advantage of Hankyung to be able to do this.... :( *sadface*

Can't wait for more... I just love the whole idea and the whole...just everything. *sheepish smile* <3

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fifteen_half January 10 2009, 13:13:54 UTC
Awww... *blushes hard*
That's, really good to know. This really, really made my day!

GAH! Thank you so much!<3

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followurdestiny January 5 2009, 23:06:47 UTC
Spot spot!!

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followurdestiny January 5 2009, 23:37:54 UTC
Beautiful sonnet indeed *gush*...
Omg... Hannie's past *needs to hug him*, my heart was breaking while reading his story!
And he was roommates with Yunho, interesting?! (maybe not...:P)
So helping Heechul and Siwon will not be easy that was to be expected, but what now... what will Hannie do? (Or what will Heechul do when Hannie refuses... :P)
Can't wait for the next chapter! Fighting!

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fifteen_half January 7 2009, 15:09:41 UTC
YES! Finally, someone who notices Yunho. Hahahahaha! I thought people were going to gush about that but apparently, he's not that interesting.XD

Hannie will, of course, have a hard time dealing with the two, who are so still undeniably in love with each other. It's hard to separate people like that, even when the others' dead, maybe.XD Hooray! I'm glad you're still reading this!! Thank you!

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