30kisses-Underground

[filledemarius]

Underground
"You have to be careful in our line of work," Michael Victoria had told his nine-year old daughter two days before his death, brushing the blond fringe out of her baby blue eyes and kissing her forehead. They never wanted her to be a police officer, but he did not discourage her. Every day, he would tell his family what he could

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[eirekurossu]

[I have read your latest fanfic yesterday, but my computer crashed down, all what I wrote in the comment box has gone! >.<]

b(^_^)d It's quite tense, I have to say, the way Alucard expressed his thoughts on Seras' odd behaviour really provided that rebellious atmosphere, the dialogues fall into place nicely ^^ And the last part where keeping the relationship private, that just drops the tension with relief xDD

Another enjoyable read, keep it up, you're one natural writer :) Looking forward for the next installment, oh, Merry Xmas! (Apologies if it's too late >.<).

[filledemarius]

Oh, don't worry about it. <3 It makes my day to read your comments.

I'm glad that you got so much out of it; I wondered if I was writing Alucard in character enough. He does push Seras to accept her true nature and scold her for being reluctant. Nonetheless, I'm happy with how this turned out and that you love my writing so much.

[eirekurossu]

You gotta keep up with the writing, I like your style b(^_^)d I rarely read fanfiction nowadays, I kept stumbling over stupid fanfics online years back, that's what put me back reading fanfiction. But yours is the best, my pick! :)

You actually outline Alucard's character well, I like it so far ^^ he too is anxious over Seras' newfound vampire instinct, and he craves to control whoever he drank blood from, but hey, seeing Alucard stressed out prevails his dark temper (that's quite like Dracula in Bram Stoker's literature).

Take your time writing your latest piece, have a great new year! :D