The Great Write Meme

[findmeakor]

Ok, so I thought it would be fun to do a little informal critique on each other's fiction. The idea stemmed from blessed_beast's The Icon Truth Meme, for icon makers.

THE GREAT WRITE MEME- Comment with your username, and those willing shall reply with thoughts on any fiction, fandom or original, that you compose. That means it does not make a difference what

Comments

[tokkitsu]

Why the hell not. mikken's my fic journal; it's nearly completely PoT with a side dish of Bleach, heh.

[tokkitsu]

Your writing seems overly pretentious, and often not terribly interesting.

[tokkitsu]

Heh. Probably! 8D Will keep that in mind, though uh, how to fix that is probably more difficult.

[tokkitsu]

Your writing is very insightful, and you obviously put alot of thought into each and every sentence, which is something to be valued, and I really, truly admire your overall skills as a writer. My one critique would be that you tend to not develop ideas as far as you could; in other words, your pieces tend to be too short. ^^ Sometimes 300 words IS all you need to say what you need to say, but other times, the shortness feels incomplete, like it leaves something to be desired.