jacks poem

[fineaswine]

mine is pretty mind. am i fast ??? so fast too fast three fast four you... i really really dont know i wish i knew i can feel a stronger adversary than the feeling that you have for me a free write writing writed righted her wrong left turn dont mean nothing to me stop... hitting me and my bag sack lack of flag of magnum packed cracked and

Comments

[azura7]

:(

it does read like he was on something.

[veganshmegan]

thats what i said!

mfw

[jazzaroo]

that's CRAZY
i think i like it
but its CRAZY

not to sound crazy, but

[anonymous]

that's what my freewrites look like, sometimes.
and definitely sober.
..maybe it was better when you thought he was on drugs?
but i'm not really nuts
i swear. so he's not, either. this is my logic.
anyway, don't worry about your baby brother even if he is crazy or high. he is great with words; all is well, fine as wine.
do the trousers blue jeans bop!
that's all.
love,
eliza.