Hello Everyone

[mousselinerocks]

Name: My LJ name is MousselineRocks and my fanfiction.net username is phoenix-rises-from-the-ashes

Age: Age doesn't interfere with writing ability/talent (or lack of the two).

Location: BC Canada

Favorite pairings: Would you like the entire archive? For Harry Potter the canon pairings - Harry/Ginny, Lily/James, Remus/Tonks - are mosty my favorites.

Comments

[pie_is_good]

Welcome! :) I've already found a beta here for a fic, so I hope this comm turns out well.

And because I'm in a nice mood for critiquing:

I liked the snippet you posted here, although you really abuse the hyphen/dash. For one, it should technically be a dash (double hyphen). So many of them make it difficult to read, I think. They're meant as interrupters, and that's exactly what they do. It interrupts the reader's thoughts for a second, and with so many of them, it's difficult to follow the story.

[sakemonster]

I agree with the above comment, too many dashes. The piece in general is a bit disjointed sounding, incorporate a some more flow? Neh?

Cute icon, and welcome to FFF.