Fixing A Hole. [me first ATU fic and first Jude/Max]

Oct 26, 2007 13:32

Title:  Fixing A Hole.
Fandom: Across The Universe
Author: me, who else?
Rating: PG-13 for drug/alcohol references and bad language.
Pairing: Judewell aka Jax aka Jude/Max
Disclaimer: They totally popped out of the movie screen and I took them home. They live in my closet and snuggle all day long.
Summary: Read the damn thing and find out. And if you ( Read more... )

jude/max, across the universe

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rockstarsyndrom October 26 2007, 18:46:02 UTC
Aww. <7

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finksgirl October 26 2007, 18:54:16 UTC
hehe.
thankies, Lotus.

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sexthings October 26 2007, 19:43:47 UTC
i must say, i just sat here for at least aminute watching your icon on loop, trying so hard not to laug myself. Hehehe

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sexthings October 26 2007, 19:43:18 UTC
wow i loved it! its nice to see Jude wanting over Max for a change in stories :)

can I archive at www.outofbounds.ws ?

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finksgirl October 26 2007, 19:44:54 UTC
um...sure.
just credit me.
^_^
and yes, I have a thing for changing it up.

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sexthings October 26 2007, 19:46:22 UTC
of course ill credit you. :) what do you want to go by? and do you want an link to an email or your journal or something?

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finksgirl October 26 2007, 19:47:59 UTC
as finksgirl.
and link me to this, my LJ. and my mibba:http://www.mibba.com/member/profile/53/

and thanks for wanting to link me there.
i might write some more one-shots. Jude/Max is fun.

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pinkeeyore October 26 2007, 22:30:29 UTC
i loved this. :)

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finksgirl October 26 2007, 23:27:07 UTC
hehe.
thanks.
^_^

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bloodyxkissesx October 27 2007, 00:18:58 UTC
(: I love this. <3

Um, but there is one thing I have to correct and I hope you don't find me terribly rude for it! D:
"The Yankee hadn’t gained much wait since he left the hospital."
It should be weight, not wait.

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finksgirl October 27 2007, 00:26:05 UTC
hehe.
yeah, I noticed that after I posted...lol.
glad you liked it.
^_^

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bloodyxkissesx October 27 2007, 00:27:52 UTC
Oh I'm sorry then for pointing it out. XD;
But yes, it was wonderful and I love that Jude was jealous rather then Max since that's how it usually goes. (:
Silly Max, pretending to be straight just because Jude does. <3

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finksgirl October 27 2007, 00:44:03 UTC
hehe. yesh.
I am still beyond convinced that the scene when Jude comes back and picks up Max they kiss.
They had to, their faces were RIGHT THERE.
-is not obsessed-

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oni_ishtar October 27 2007, 01:59:33 UTC
SEQUEL NOW!!!!!!!! lol, seriously, i absolutely loved this, the passion was very clear, i love your writing style, the specific detail of certain things, in certain places, this line being a prime example

"A sharp tug on filthy flannel. Chapped, dry lips and a persistent tongue. A gasp and a faint moan and an electrifying kiss."

loved it ^^

~Oni

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finksgirl October 27 2007, 02:06:01 UTC
Thanks so much.
^_^
I dunno if I could write a sequel.
I usually am the slash one-shot woman.
lol.
I've only written a mini-series of slash and am attempting a full series in a few months.
Maybe if my brain thinks of a way to continue.
^_^
thanks for liking.

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