Eight Days

[finksgirl]

Title: Eight Days.
Fandom: Across The Universe
Author: me, who else?
Rating: PG?
Pairing: Judewell aka Jax aka Jude/Max
Disclaimer: They totally popped out of the movie screen and I took them home. They live in my closet and snuggle all day long.
Summary: Some spoilers in it. This deals more with the mysterious Jude's back story and a very introspective

Comments

[pinkeeyore]

that was abselutely lovely.

[finksgirl]

why thank you.
^_^

[kiyda]

Incredibly well written. I'm astonished by how well you captured the beauy of the characters, their inner turmoil and their dawdling. Like Max playing with the frabic of his t-shirt and observing the cracked paintchips. The imagery you created was just so easy to picture. I loved it! :D

[finksgirl]

thanks so much for the comment!
I spend a lot of time on details and I spent the last week on this.
I tend to psychoanalyze any character I write about and I had quite the time with Jude. He was so interesting and so mysterious, the film leaves his past in the dark.
There's also a subliminal message in the story and I'll give you a hint: It's in the dialogue.

^_-

[rockstarsyndrom]

Holy hell, Ash!

This was... wow.

That is the only thing I can think to call it.

[finksgirl]

hehe...
i loves ya, Maxie.
^_-

[lore_lowell]

It was lovely. You did wonderful things with the imagery and the mood. I wish I had a better comment because it was a beautiful story, but I'm braindead and this didn't really help. ;) Keep it up.

[finksgirl]

haha...thanks.
and no...it's a good comment.
i can't say anything...i havent slept in two days so my brain isn't completely working either...lol.

[saint0942]

It was so pretty. I loved it.

[finksgirl]

^_^
thanks so much.