Comments | fireandice2008: Fic: Prompt: "Cherry Red"

evil_little_dog in fireandice2008

Fic: Prompt: "Cherry Red"

Sep 16, 2008 06:43

Comments 14

annepackrat October 6 2008, 15:39:54 UTC

Good work! I think you have a mistake in this sentence though:

The plate and fork in her hands clattered to the round as she pulled him back to her, and initiated a second kiss.

strandedthought October 13 2008, 07:05:40 UTC

Thanks. I'll be fixing that!

*it had to be in the last couple sentences*

evil_little_dog October 13 2008, 11:18:24 UTC

That's always the way it goes. *grin*

cornerofmadness October 6 2008, 16:11:55 UTC

this was cute

strandedthought October 13 2008, 07:06:29 UTC

Thanks

Your icon is adorable!

evil_little_dog October 13 2008, 11:18:54 UTC

Oh, I made it...thanks! It's completely shareable.

evil_little_dog October 13 2008, 11:19:31 UTC

Okay, I didn't make that icon, I thought you were responding to something I said. *laughs*

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lyrangalia October 6 2008, 16:34:47 UTC

Thanks for sharing! This was sweet.

strandedthought October 13 2008, 07:06:50 UTC

Thank you!

ana_leez October 6 2008, 22:56:52 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing! :3

strandedthought October 13 2008, 07:07:08 UTC

Thanks!

lklbooks October 13 2008, 21:24:43 UTC

That was totally adorable. xD