[FIC] permanently black and blue (for you), 5/5

Feb 24, 2011 16:33



5.

On some indeterminate day in the future, Arthur will wake up and roll over, seeking the heat of another body. He will be greeted with an empty space, but warm sheets.

He will grumble incoherently under his breath before sitting up in bed, rubbing at his eyes. The bedroom will be in a state of disarray - shirts tossed haphazardly around the ( Read more... )

hetalia, france/england

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katoritsubasa February 25 2011, 03:23:49 UTC
That was beautiful. Definitely adding this to my favourites to read later. :)

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fireblazie February 25 2011, 23:30:45 UTC
Thank you so much! Glad to have made your favorites list. :)

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bunnytstar February 25 2011, 06:36:04 UTC
Beautiful story and it was very addicting to read too. I loved how in character Francis and Arthur were.

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fireblazie February 25 2011, 23:34:38 UTC
Thanks! ♥ I'm so happy you thought they were in character. These two were tough to write (for me, anyway).

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marinoa February 25 2011, 08:49:03 UTC
Oh dear, this was so beautiful. I just love this kind of stories and you managed to... I don't know. xD leave me speechless. What I'm trying to say is that I simply loved this. ^^;

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fireblazie February 25 2011, 23:36:07 UTC
Thank you for the lovely comment, dear :D

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bioniceye February 25 2011, 12:17:50 UTC
Oh, my. ♥

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fireblazie February 25 2011, 23:40:22 UTC
I hope that's a good thing ♥

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falling_voices February 25 2011, 14:16:43 UTC
You posted it &hearts

And you know how I feel about this already,, but I'll say it again: there's so much love in this, in every word they speak, in every way Arthur thinks of growing old and doing it with Francis of all people, in every declaration that Francis says and Arthur misses. It's beautiful. And just, yeah, I love domesticity like a purring pretty thing, but there was the odd tinge of desperation in this as well, and my heart, it broke just a little bit. When Francis said one thousand years. It's just. I'm a little bit breathless.

ALSO BY THE WAY - the Sherlock fic? is The Heart, And Other Fleshy Organs, by stickstockstone, I think. It's completely different from this, though; it was the piece about Arthur stapling his thoughts in a box and the heart in the duvet that reminded me of it. ;)

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fireblazie February 25 2011, 23:48:53 UTC
Yes, yes, I did ♥

Thank you so much! And I really do have to thank you for putting up that lovely prompt. If I hadn't seen that, well, this would never have been written. I am so glad that you enjoyed the story and that it slightly broke your heart ;D

AND YAY, MORE FIC! I'll definitely read that soon.

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