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Can't Be Replaced

Dec 26, 2009 04:55

Title: Can’t Be Replaced
Author: mfirefly10
Characters: Jayne, Mal, Simon; mentions of Zoe and Wash
Prompt: part
Challenge: firefly100Word Count: 100 + 400 ( Read more... )

simon, prompt: part, mal, wash, jayne, zoe

Comments 6

xfirefly9x December 26 2009, 13:09:09 UTC

Amazing stuff! So very sad and true to the characters, Mal with the denial and Jayne with the making sense. And poor Zoe! *pets her* Love the last line. :P

mfirefly10 December 26 2009, 20:16:57 UTC

Thank you!

I'm still very new to writing in this 'Verse so it's nice to know I'm doing okay:)

colls December 27 2009, 16:33:47 UTC

great little snippet of post-BDM stuff. :)

mfirefly10 December 27 2009, 18:13:42 UTC

Thank you:)

foxrafer January 11 2010, 19:54:08 UTC

Very moving. I get a good sense of each of the characters.

mfirefly10 January 14 2010, 01:27:21 UTC

Thank you:)