Drabbles: Time to Pop 1/1 (55 words) Tommy, and Discovery and Courage (100 words) Tommy

[firelit_dreams]

Note Many thanks to the always awesome elizabuffy for saving me from posting these with the titles of Drabble 1 and Drabble 2 by giving them titles. :)

These were both taken from prompts in an Android writing app for Kindle Fire so the first isn't a true drabble but a 55 word story which was what the prompt called for.

Title: Time to Pop
Author:

Comments

[casey270]

i really like these. it's not easy getting all the feelings to fit in a drabble, but you did it well. you need to come play in glam_100

[firelit_dreams]

Thanks, and no it's not. I thought 100 words was hard, but that 55 word one was hell. I do watch glam 100 and will probably participate eventually. Something just needs to hit me at the right time.

[jeweledvixen]

These are great drabbles. They both tell an entire story in just a few short words. More please. :)

[firelit_dreams]

Thanks!

[firelit_dreams]

Thanks!

[thrace_adams]

Oh these are really good. Angsty but sometimes angst is good.

[firelit_dreams]

Thanks. Angst is good sometimes. For some reasons drabbles always end up on the angsty side for me.

[janshawaii]

really liked how you were able to put so much in so few characters! Being one that finds it hard to be 'concise' (just ask anyone when I start to tell a story. . LOL!). . I applaud your abilities!!

<3

[firelit_dreams]

I'm not always concise. My longer fics can be very rambling. But I love the challenge of writing a true drabble or these 55 word ones that my kindle app gives me. It teaches you how to really choose words to get the most impact.

And thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed them. :)

[janshawaii]

LOL! I'm back. . .see? told you I had a problem with being concise! LOL!

I forgot to say that I like the angsty-tone to the posts. . . I especially like when it's Adam or Tommy having that cause that tightening of the stomach. . the strained breathing. . LOL! We're terrible, we love to see our boyz 'suffer'. . .well, at least before we see them enjoy each other's company!! =P

<3