[fic] Forbidden Fruit Chapter 2

[fireside_story]

This is very quickly becoming an interesting fic to write. I have given myself permission to write all the scenes I thought were to raunchy for my other fics, so I'm letting my imagination run away every time I start to write. Personally I'm enjoying the outcome, well mostly, I just hope other people dont think it's too much of a good thing. I've

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[prettyorianna]

Wow, I do not envy Tatsuya his... position. Oh, well, maybe I do. Under Ryo sounds like a good place to be. Hopefully, Ryo isn't too hurt knowing that Tatsuya's coming from some other refusal into his arms.

This is really good so far (^_^) More plz?

[fireside_story]

Ryo kinda has the short end of the stick in this one, and I hate to say this, but things get worse for him as the story unfolds. Hopefully I can figure out a happy ending for him to make up for everything.

Glad your enjoying this fic so far and hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.

[laksmianindita]

wow... complicated...
can't wait for your next update :)

[fireside_story]

Yeah, it seems my fics tend to be very complicated and full of agnsty moments, and this one is no exception.

I'm glad your enjoying this fic too and hopefully the next chapter will be up soon.

[dori_liv]

So happy to see an update!
My heart dropped when Kame rejected Ueda so directly like that :( You always make me feel sorry for poor Ueda. But I'm glad he stood his ground and confronted Kame the way he did - even if it still didn't end the way he was hoping.
Kame and Ueda both seemed so needy it was a very hot scene between them!

I'm always a sucker for Ryoda too. Though you seem to have a habit of breaking a few hearts along the way with your fics xD Poor Ryo and his unrequited love. I wonder if Ueda really has no idea what Ryo feels for him, or if he's just pretending or denying it to himself. But I did like the way Ueda was sort of flirty with Ryo.

Hope you feel better!

[fireside_story]

I've noticed too that I seem to like to put Ueda in these relationships that make him not happy and have him in love with Kame. Now I feel kinda bad turning Ueda into a heart breaker!!!

I also seem to enjoy confusing poor Kame, but these two are my favourites so I really do love them!!! Actually I think that's why I mess with them so much in my stories, because they are my favourites. As for the whole Ryoda thing, I have to admit, I've never really seen anything with these two. I saw one picture where Ueda was giving Ryo the nastiest look, but that's it. I just needed someone in this fic to be Ueda's bed buddy and Ryo was the first one who came to my mind.

And with the whole Ueda knowing about Ryo's feelings, you actually find out that answer in the next chapter, and you gave me the idea for it, so thank you!!

I'm glad your enjoying this fic as well, and thanks for always reading me stuff.

[mirai_ke]

Oh poor Ueda, how much it must have hurt to be rejected like that... I'm not sure he handled it right though, going to Ryo for comfort is just going to complicate things :(

How I love angsty KameDa stories ~ Looking forward to the next chapter :)