Two Original Pieces!

[firetide]

Two works of fiction for you guys today! One is a story that I've been working on for a writing competition at University, and the other is one that was just random thoughts in my head. The second one is a total plot-what-plot, I just wrote it when I was feeling depressed, but I still thought it worthy of inclusion. Let me know what you think of

Comments

[acherry]

Wow, they're beautiful. Very very depressing, but you write beautifully. I can understand both pieces because I feel both. You managed to get ehe emotions down pat and described the feelings and thoughts perfectly. I especially love the ending of the first piece. =)

I actually came here for another reason (although I'm glad to have found those two fiction pieces). Remember me? The girl on Draco_Hermione who asked for help with a potion hereI've decided on a transmogrification potion, but I have no idea what the ingredients should be, as I'm not good with making those up. You mentioned wicca, but I don't know much about it, unfortunately. Can you help me create the ingredients list? I thought that one of the ingredients should be a bit of whatever animal they're turning into. See, my solution to the problem of how they turned into each other is a bit like the Polyjuice Potion. The TPotion (long name T.T) is meant for animals right? So if they accidentally put a bit of human something in it, the potion would screw up and they turn into

[acherry]

Oh, and I friended you. =) I want to read more of your work!

[firetide]

I remember :o). And of course I'll help you

[acherry]

Lol, I used to play Neopets. I've forgotten about my account and pets though. =( The idea came out of the blue, but :D Maybe Neopets did have something to do with it