AWDT time...

Apr 08, 2006 23:06

Yay! I kicked my writer's block under the bed and dragged those plot bunnies out! Enjoy! BTW...let me know if you find any boo boos. I was pretty tired when I finished this and haven't had much of a chance to really give it a thorough going over. :)

Written for the AWDT challenge hosted by jamie2109 and nocturnali. This week's challenge:

"What good would it be to ( Read more... )

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luci0logy April 13 2006, 23:01:48 UTC
I like the way you hint at Draco's past with Lucius. It really draws the reader in wanting to know more, and I so want to know more. I'm also really intrigued as to why Lucius is such a threat to Draco if the war is over, apart from having the Ministry in his pocket. Unless of course he could do something like have Draco sectioned because he didn't like his friendship with Harry. Looking forward to reading more.

“I couldn’t any more kill you than you could me Draco.

The usual phrasing is I could no more kill you than you could me, Draco.

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firnsarnien April 14 2006, 04:07:11 UTC
Intrigue...hmmm...that's a good thing, no? Heh, heh. ;) Lucius is a vicious man, mean and underhanded. At least, that's how I've always viewed him. Not at all affectionate and compassionate towards his son. He's oblivious to many things, important things. That's all I'll say about that. ;)

Thanks for the kind words, I hope I don't disappoint. BTW...thanks for the tip on my wording too. I fixed that boo boo pronto! :)

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luci0logy April 14 2006, 05:26:13 UTC
No you didn't disappoint. I certainly am intrigued.

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