Second Part...

[firnsarnien]

Hi everyone! :) I finally got the second part to Falling Apart In Quiet Measures done...yay! This was written for the AWDT prompt hosted by jamie2109 and nocturnali. This week's prompt was:

"Can we go now?"As always, if you see any boo boos, please feel free to let me know. I'll be happy to fix them. BTW...I'd like to link the first part of the story to this

Comments

[firnsarnien]

I do plan on writing more and I'm glad you liked the way I wrote Lucius. I really struggled with that.

And the boo boos? Fixed them! I wrote and re-wrote and re-wrote so many times that the words all started blurring together. It makes it really hard to look over and catch any mistakes you might have made so I always appreciate it when people let me know. :) Thanks bunches for pointing them out.

Now, on to the linking, I shall give it a try. *crosses fingers* Thanks for the info. :)

[snottygrrl]

really nice. i lurve your oc secretary chick. v. v. cool.

your lucius was fabu.

sorry for the short comment, but it is one of those days. doesn't mean i don't think the story wonderful. ♥

[firnsarnien]

Awww, you didn't need a long review to let me know how much you liked this. :) You said it just fine here.

As for my oc secretary chick, heh, heh, yeah, I kinda liked her too. I thought poor Draco needed someone else besides Harry looking out for him. That boy always gets the short end of the stick. At least this way, he gets someone who can kick the ass of anyone who screws with him! Including Harry! LOL

Thanks for the review. I appreciate you taking the time to tell me how you liked it. :)