First off, I would just like to say that I very much appreciated Chen/Liyin, yes. AND ChanSoo is precious because yes, they fought but with good intents! I like how this drabble is divided into sections based on each event; it really showcases how their relationship grows even within this small time frame. The little things Chanyeol would do to spend more time with Kyungsoo was adorable...and now I want pancakes.
WHIT /sideeyes you/ HOW IS THIS A DRABBLE but omg you chose this prompt omg you filled it perfectly i knew something was up, i though it was all just chanyeol being careless but for him to do it on purpose omg he must have wanted to spend time with kyungsoo badly and i like your characterisation of them, you made them both not to be the kind of people who got into arguments with raised voices and it was really cute the way kyungsoo tried to make things better this was really refreshing!
i'm soRrY i just ;; i had the idea for the whole thing in my head and i couldn't not finish it ldkmdlk i really don't know when the last time i wrote this much was ;;;
Again. I know you said that you went over the word limit... this is a complete one shot, not a drabble.
Okay onto the next part, I really liked how you introduced the notion that they were dating through the description of their daily lives rather than just outright "his boyfriend". Their actions were cute and the way Chanyeol had tried to get Kyungsoo to spend more time with him makes it even more adorable. I'm glad that they made up in the end, your way with words is just sobs...
i mean when real life hands you such a moment on a platter how do you not use it tbh. and lkmddlkmvf i'm sorry i will stay within word count next time ;;; this was completely unexpected i really don't write this much... ever lol
jongdae/liyin ARE THEY CANON OR I am sure shes a very kind person and its difficult for a chinese girl to debut solo (she did debut solo right) in south korea and shes an amazing singer and very pretty too but ARE THEY CANON OR
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but omg you chose this prompt omg you filled it perfectly
i knew something was up, i though it was all just chanyeol being careless but for him to do it on purpose omg he must have wanted to spend time with kyungsoo badly
and i like your characterisation of them, you made them both not to be the kind of people who got into arguments with raised voices and it was really cute the way kyungsoo tried to make things better
this was really refreshing!
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Again. I know you said that you went over the word limit... this is a complete one shot, not a drabble.
Okay onto the next part, I really liked how you introduced the notion that they were dating through the description of their daily lives rather than just outright "his boyfriend". Their actions were cute and the way Chanyeol had tried to get Kyungsoo to spend more time with him makes it even more adorable. I'm glad that they made up in the end, your way with words is just sobs...
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I am sure shes a very kind person and its difficult for a chinese girl to debut solo (she did debut solo right) in south korea and shes an amazing singer and very pretty too but ARE THEY CANON OR
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