ERNON-SAN!!! this was so sweeett!!! ^_^ it made me go "awwww!!" its so strange because even though its this excerpt i can imagine the whole story sorrounding it!! i love it!! portrays feelings and characters really well which is hard to do in short excerpts ^_^ this is awesome ernon-san so DONT YOU DARE CALL IT CRAP!!!!
do you remember the "Criticism Wanted" post i did where i wrote a story from a guys point of view? well i posted a new entry "Criticism Wanted ((Part Two))" and it's the continuation of that. it's not as good because i think i seriously lost my writing mojo, but i'd still like some thoughts on it, positive or negative. please read and comment?
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DONT YOU DARE CALL IT CRAP!!!!
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*loves*
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HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD ONE GOOD SIR!! ^______^
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it's not as good because i think i seriously lost my writing mojo, but i'd still like some thoughts on it, positive or negative.
please read and comment?
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