was vs. were

Jul 09, 2006 12:08

this post borrowed from EnglishForums.com.


Question:
On the front page of today's Wall Street Journal there is an article titled, Uneasy Compromise: To Keep Teens Safe, Some Parents Allow Drinking at Home. In the article, there is a paragraph as follows:

Mrs. Anderson felt pressure to resign as treasurer of an organization that arranged scholarships for student athletes. She says other group members told her that the local police would no longer make donations to the group if she was involved. "I had worked hard to make that organization what it was," says Mrs. Anderson. "In the end they valued the $500 from the police more than they valued me." A police spokesman says the department never threatened to pull its donation.

I underlined "was". As I read the sentence I thought "was" should be "were". Am I correct?

Answer:
Strictly speaking, was is always wrong in the context of an if clause when the other clause contains would, i.e., in the pattern

if ... was ..., ... would ...
or
... would ..., if ... was ...

So you are correct.
Even the best journalists disregard the "rule", but strictly speaking, that's the rule.

Exception: when would means used to, as in:

She would lie out in the shade if it was too hot indoors.

Not the same meaning as: She would lie out in the shade if it were too hot indoors.
It's strange how the choice of was or were in one clause determines how the verb "lie" in the other clause is interpreted: habitual vs. one-time hypothetical.

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i had to look this up because it just wasn't making sense to me. i'm still not sure that i understand it entirely. it's going to take some practice.

english

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