Comments | fishisbad: Kisses like tears and cigarettes

fishisbad

Kisses like tears and cigarettes - Reita/Aoi

Sep 10, 2009 00:02

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: After they finish with the recording, Aoi suggests they go on a drive in Reita’s car.
Word count: 847
Disclaimer: I'm in no way affiliated with the GazettE or PS Company.
Characters are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people is purely coincidental.
Comments: crossposted to jrock_quotefic.

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quotefic, gazefic, reitaxaoi

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saerashi September 10 2009, 08:40:57 UTC

oh god that made me smile silly.. heheh

fishisbad September 10 2009, 12:42:06 UTC

That is nice to hear. Thanks.

drunkelnatt September 10 2009, 12:16:54 UTC

Bug guts, lol! Wait, is this supposed to be innocent?? I guess Reita needs some but Aoi... merely kisses him. A... supposedly innocent kiss. ^^;;

But ahhhhh~ so cute~ :D

fishisbad September 10 2009, 12:48:48 UTC

Yes, this was supposed to be completely innocent and without much forethought. Thank you!

n3uromanc3r September 10 2009, 20:25:56 UTC

I liked it. Especially Aoi's last sentence and his carefree behaviour.

fishisbad September 10 2009, 20:30:19 UTC

I like the last sentence too :) I am not sure Aoi would usually be so carefree, but the way I wanted him is in a good mood from the finishing of recording and just not thinking too much about things. So just ending it in a nice tone and without angst and complications. Thank you.

quarrions January 6 2010, 10:24:06 UTC

this was a ..... *sighs contently*
exactly why I love Aoi/ Rei

nothing wrong can go their way
they are just perfect like that ...

I am warm inside now
I really loved the whole first scene in the car, especially that silent part <3
and I am suspecting Aoi of remembering the first kiss XDDD
aaarhg ...seriously this was perfect

cateris January 24 2010, 02:25:36 UTC

Reita lit a cigarette, but instead of calming his nerves the cigarette smoke made him nauseous. Rolling the window slightly down, he threw it out on the wet asphalt.

God I loved this! It was VERY cinematic and it helped into setting the mood of the whole scene.

“Aoi,” he repeated, his voice softer, closer. Just before brushing his lips against Aoi’s.

A surprised whimper escaped Aoi’s mouth. A single whimper before Reita silenced it with a firm kiss on Aoi’s wet lips, and drowned all the others in the following tender kisses.

This one went straight into my panties and YESYESYESIKNOWI'MGIVINGOUTALREADYTOOMANYDETAILSYOUDON'TCAREABOUT,AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!!! BUT YES, THIS ONE TOOK ME MY SURPRISE! AND OMFG WHAT A SURPRISE IT WAS!!!

Reita watched him go, and after he disappeared out of sight, Reita remained sitting inside his car.
Just staring through the windshield.AGAIN a lovely cinematic image cateris is personally mad about when meeting it in the stories she reads :D SERIOUSLY! This fic is so much about Reita that we ALL find ( ... )