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fishisbad

Always and Never - Yune/Aoi

Oct 14, 2009 18:58

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Romance, Angst
Rating: R
Warnings: Cheating
Summary: He never expects his voice to greet him.
Word count: 769
Disclaimer: I'm in no way affiliated with the GazettE or PS Company.
Characters are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people is purely coincidental.
Comments: Great many thanks to heygeorge!

( Wednesday )

gazefic, yunexaoi

Comments 8

gratiela October 14 2009, 19:50:47 UTC

Yune’s warm hand stops his fumbling movements. He pushes Aoi away. Towards the brightly colored bed.

Aoi sits and watches Yune undress himself. Slowly. Carefully placing his shirt on the backrest of the chair. Tie folded neatly over it. Shoes with socks under it. Neatly folding his pants, to avoid creasing, he places them on the seat./i>

OH god.. the contrast between their paces almost broke my heart. Maybe I deem too much importance to small gestures... but this contrast just proves they were both too different.

Aoi knows that by society standards he should feel guilty for taking someone’s husband. But he doesn’t. Because Yune was his first. Always. And never his.
And again - Aoi always knew the truth. But you don't really choose when it comes to falling in love, is it?

WOW!
*gives you pink-glazed-cookies*

fishisbad October 14 2009, 20:11:57 UTC

Hmm, the idea behind this one is that Yune left him (and the band) to get married, have a normal boring life. He was with Aoi, because they do have feelings for each other, but being gay is not something that he ever could come in terms with. At least that is how Yune is in my stories. And I like to torture Aoi with that nostalgia ( ... )

You're welcome! gratiela October 14 2009, 20:24:57 UTC

Yeah, your experimental lazy writing seems to be working just fine if you ask me - it was pretty self explanatoryI dunno how to spell that! o_0; Yune=boring and never-to-out-closet-case and Aoi... just nostalgic and slightly weak.
A pleasant reading alltogether. Airy? (-that or I've been watching too many cookie pictures!xD)

Naaaah unload away, I don't mind it! ^__^
(my Miyavi-on-a-beach icon will take it all away!)

Re: You're welcome! fishisbad October 14 2009, 20:27:34 UTC

:D You are just so epic. Have fun with cookie pictures.

*blushes while laughing* gratiela October 14 2009, 20:33:39 UTC

Why thank you! I actually don't recall someone recently calling me epic! *hugs you*

(I think the pics made me want to raid the kitchen.. even though it's 23.30 here)

Re: *blushes while laughing* fishisbad October 14 2009, 20:37:39 UTC

There is always a first time for everything :)
Looking at food pictures can really make one hungry. If you have something to raid I say go for it ;D

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fishisbad October 15 2009, 05:11:47 UTC

Poor Aoi, but that is just how life is. Thank you for reading and commenting!

quarrions January 6 2010, 10:36:04 UTC

Your sister gave me your number,” he explains.

“I am in town on business, this Wednesday,” he says.

“I thought maybe we could meet?” he asks.

totally loved this part with the repetition <3 I love repetition of words, gives a greater impact

They don’t mention her.

aaaaaaah, damn, it´s always a woman (but at least there is some chance for us, right ?? XDDDDDDDDDDD )

Aoi knows that by society standards he should feel guilty for taking someone’s husband. But he doesn’t. Because Yune was his first. Always. And never his.

*cries* damn the rules... totally h.e.a.r.t.b.r.e.a.k.i.n.g

Aoi wants to hold onto this feeling but the hair under his fingers is short instead of longomfg I totally loved this *_*, great, great, great choose of ...well was it even a metaphor ( ... )