Comments | fishisbad: Just say it

fishisbad

Just say it - Uruha/Aoi

Jul 08, 2009 17:49

Chapters: Oneshot
Genre: Romance
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Summary: Aoi couldn’t be the one to enforce the barrier just when Uruha was ready to break it down.
Word count: 719
Disclaimer: I'm in no way affiliated with the GazettE or PS Company.
Characters are fictional. Any resemblance to actual people is purely coincidental.
Comments: Great many thanks ( Read more... )

uruhaxaoi, gazefic

Comments 19

xxshamisen July 8 2009, 17:08:07 UTC

Oh, how I love fics that depict how it's actually Uruha who yearns for Aoi. ♥

Really lovely. Thanks for this piece~ :3

fishisbad July 8 2009, 17:13:41 UTC

Yes, sometimes I can't help myself and have to write it like that. Thank you for your comment!

gratiela July 8 2009, 18:48:16 UTC

"Can I come in?" Uruha asked.

"No." Aoi had no intention to move aside.

and then

"Yes," he finally said.

And Aoi moved aside to let him in.

So many emotions kept inside, so many unacknowledged touches... and everything slides into place with just 2 words! Loved it!!

fishisbad July 8 2009, 18:50:06 UTC

I love this comment :) Thank you for wording it in such a great way <3

gratiela July 8 2009, 19:00:01 UTC

You're welcome! xDD
Like i already told you: your writing deserves praises! I'm very pleased to deliver it!xD

*gives you chocolates and summer flowers*

fishisbad July 8 2009, 19:05:32 UTC

You are ever so kind :D

*gives you candies and summer showers*
(I couldn't resist the rhyme ;))

Thread 6

ri0t_machine July 8 2009, 21:18:10 UTC

Uruha's attraction to Aoi and the uncertainty and the anger was all so beautiful.
It just was building and building up and with just one word, the curtain drops.
I loved it! <3

fishisbad July 8 2009, 21:20:34 UTC

Thank you for making such an elaborate comment. I am glad you enjoyed this so much then.

silveryxdark July 9 2009, 11:38:23 UTC

Ah, I loved it. I liked how Uruha's feelings came through, it was very well-written.

I kind of fail at commenting, sorry about that.

fishisbad July 9 2009, 11:43:12 UTC

You don't fail at commenting. Your nice words made my day just a little bit better, it actually made me smile. Thank you!

hara_emi July 10 2009, 14:52:18 UTC

Aww, this is short, but Aoi's descision to let him in really must have meant quite a bit to them both. It's sweet,really ^^

fishisbad July 10 2009, 15:31:44 UTC

Most of my stuff is short, can't help it. Letting Uruha in was supposed to be a very meaningful thing. After all, at the threat of being left on the outside (not just the door but Aoi's life too) Uruha had to admit that he wanted in and it wasn't exactly easy for Aoi to do so after constant dissapointment. I wasn't actually thinking this much about it while writing this, but there you have it. Thank you for your comment!