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Five-0 frolic: extension

Sep 27, 2011 13:28

Title: Stealth Nanny McPhee
Author: ariadne83
Prompt(s) Used: They prove Steve innocent, Kono too, the task force is back together. But now Danny has custody of both Grace and his new child (for some reason other than Rachel dying/being a bad person) and needs somewhere else to live because his place isn't suited for more than one person.
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rating: pg-13, type: fanfic, pairing: danny/steve, genre: slash

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ariadne83 September 27 2011, 04:47:36 UTC

Thank you so much! Once the idea of Rachel going "You know what? Fuck this; guys keep jerking me around so I'm going to do my own thing" popped into my head it sort of took on a life of its own.

I love writing Danny. His vocabulary fills me with glee :D

simplyn2deep September 27 2011, 04:02:21 UTC

love this

ariadne83 September 27 2011, 04:47:50 UTC

Thanks :)

somehowunbroken September 27 2011, 04:21:14 UTC

Wonderfully done :)

ariadne83 September 27 2011, 04:48:47 UTC

Thank you, m'dear. As promised, no Rachel-bashing :)

la_mariane September 27 2011, 10:46:18 UTC

Love this fic! I especially like Steve's house being invaded by Williamses.

ariadne83 September 27 2011, 16:00:25 UTC

Hee thanks! Steve has no idea what he's let himself in for - just wait until the new baby arrives and Danny's parents want to come visit...

la_mariane October 2 2011, 16:30:31 UTC

Seems like you have the sequel already plotted out...

ariadne83 October 3 2011, 02:35:23 UTC

There was supposed to be A LOT more to this fic, so I definitely have some more ideas sketched out :-)

alba17 September 27 2011, 11:31:54 UTC

Awesome, I love it! Yes, Steve, please only stalk in a legal and caring way, hee. I love Danny's voice here and the house being full of kid stuff so you can't even open the door.

I'm so glad you were able to finish and post this.

ariadne83 September 27 2011, 16:14:57 UTC

Thanks!

Hee that part is loosely based on reality - I honestly had no idea how much kid-stuff multiplies until it's *everywhere* until my niece was born. She's four now, and I can only imagine (with horror) how much stuff she'll have by the time she's nine LOL

alba17 September 27 2011, 19:58:19 UTC

I'm intimately familiar with the issue of kid-stuff. *looks around* I can identify.