Comments | five_of_five: Inception - "Dear Forgiveness, I Saved a Plate for You" (Arthur/Eames NC17)

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Inception - "Dear Forgiveness, I Saved a Plate for You" (Arthur/Eames NC17)

Dec 21, 2011 04:45

For: kellifer_fic
Title: Dear Forgiveness, I Saved a Plate for You
Pairing: Arthur/Eames
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 78oo
Warnings: Boys being dumb, light angst
Summary: It’s been nearly two years since Arthur left to follow Cobb, now he’s back home with Eames where he belongs. Only he might not belong here anymore.
Author's Notes: Special thanks to gelbwax for the last ( Read more... )

pairing: arthur/eames, rating: nc17, fanfiction, community: dream_holiday, fandom: inception

Comments 20

shaded_sun December 22 2011, 13:38:41 UTC

This is a lovely story. It all felt so very real.

You conveyed the strains of their relationship so well. The lack of communication, Arthur feeling lost in his own home, Eames being driven to make all the changes to the house when Arthur was gone. I'm really glad they managed to find a way to work things out. ♥

Also: Arthur Two, the rubber duck! Eames talking to him about work & random things in lieu of Arthur. <333

five_of_five December 23 2011, 21:28:59 UTC

Your comment has me blushing and giddy with happiness, thank you so very much! I'm really glad their actions and motivations seemed real to you, and that those annoying boys finally cooperated so they could get their happily ever after ♥

I have no idea where the duck came from, Eames just needed someone to love!

shaded_sun December 24 2011, 03:34:25 UTC

<333 It was a delight to read.

I have no idea where the duck came from, Eames just needed someone to love!
I'm getting all choked up at that! (I'm such a wuss.)

five_of_five December 25 2011, 01:03:57 UTC

Oh no! *hugs you* It's okay, Arthur the First came back and then Eames had twice the Arthurs to love!

_profiterole_ December 22 2011, 21:36:15 UTC

That was such a great story, the characterisations were perfect. <3

five_of_five December 23 2011, 21:30:00 UTC

Thank you for reading and leaving such a lovely comment! <3

bookshop December 24 2011, 06:53:36 UTC

this is adorable and sweet. <3

five_of_five December 25 2011, 00:58:46 UTC

Thank you! <3

happy_braindead December 24 2011, 18:57:51 UTC

You made my heart ache and my eyes tear up a bit (on christmas, at that) but the ending soothed me. This was lovely. Thanks for sharing.

five_of_five December 25 2011, 01:02:35 UTC

Aww, I'm sorry *hugs* I'm glad the ending helped take away the sadness. I hope the rest of your Christmas is very merry and thank you for commenting <3