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five_of_five April 29 2011, 07:05:52 UTC
Thank you! All of your wonderful comments have me grinning like your JGL icon :D

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five_of_five April 29 2011, 23:50:50 UTC
Thank you! I must admit to being a bit nervous about the gun play, so I'm very happy it worked for you &hearts

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nature_aly April 29 2011, 15:50:20 UTC
I absolutely love Rosencrantz and Guildenstern, and it has made me love Hamlet much more than I originally did in high school English. Every quote you chose really resonated with me to set the mood. I really want to compliment you on the structure of this fic, I really like how the story unfolded, especially the revelation of the backstory of Dreamshare. They sound scary.

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five_of_five April 30 2011, 00:59:36 UTC
Thanks for the amazing feedback! I reread "Hamlet" and cheated by watching "Rosencrantz and Guildenstern" instead of rereading it, searching for the right quotes so I'm totally psyched that someone else shares in my geek joy :D. Thank you again for noticing and commenting on the details you enjoyed, you make the neurotic writer in me glow with happiness! &hearts

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enchantress0223 April 30 2011, 08:22:25 UTC
This was so much fun and so hot. I have to admit that there were moments of terrifying tension for me as well. I love how you worked in the quotes and then there was gun!porn. And it was good, not the cheesy kind you often see. Thank you for all of this. Sorry if i'm not completely coherent. It's four in the morning.

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five_of_five May 2 2011, 00:19:27 UTC
Oh my goodness, thank you! Wow, those are some of the nicest compliments I've ever gotten :D. I am so happy that this story worked for you; and have no fear, you are both completely coherent and completely wonderful! Thank you again! &hearts

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draven98 May 8 2011, 05:29:12 UTC
You are such a talented writer. You weaved the quotes in with the story so well and I enjoyed how everything flowed so beautifully. Thanks so much for writing and sharing.

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five_of_five May 9 2011, 04:25:36 UTC
Wow, I honestly don't know what to say to such a kind comment. Thank you so much and I'm very happy you enjoyed this story! :D

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