[Fic] Seducing You With Shakespeare

Feb 15, 2012 02:59

Title: Seducing You With Shakespeare
Pairings/Characters: USUK, Monaco (Sophie)/Serboga (Sergio), France, Japan.
Word Count: 2,927
Rating/Warning: PG, high school AU, Shakespeare sonnets and google search analysis.
Summary: It's Valentines Day, and someone's been putting sonnets in Alfred's locker.

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day? )

america, england, us/uk, japan, fanfic, france, monaco, hetalia, one-shot

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fullmetalfire February 16 2012, 02:29:24 UTC
Oh Francis, it had to be you who helped Arthur with his Valentines. XD That was a lovely little story with some cute Gakuen fanservice. Nice job. ;) Having them quote Shakespeare to each other (and having Alfred be able to quote it back) was actually pretty neat. Also, the font you picked was pretty elegant and much easier to read than some. I liked Arthur's explanation for why he made it so elaborate and why such proof was needed in a high school setting. It made sense. Shy Arthur is shy. haha That was also terribly cute. The lab partners bit was a nice bit of backstory that made them knowing each other personally with some anonymity, so that it made practical sense. I've got a thing about that, I like to see sequence in stories. XD Anyway, this was great and I really enjoyd reading it. Good luck with USxUK Sweethearts Week. Cheers.

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fivedayslater February 19 2012, 17:24:42 UTC
Thank you! He takes wooing his crushes very seriously. XD

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fivedayslater February 19 2012, 17:24:08 UTC
Of course, who else would it be? XD Thank you! There are a lot of high school AUs out there, so I wanted to try something a little different. Sequence in stories is a good thing to have imo. XD Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

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xolavander February 16 2012, 04:16:49 UTC
Oh my. It's been a while since I last commented on your work.

I'm kind of incoherent today. So I'm trying my best to get my comments done without putting in blabbering words.

This is so sweet. And I didn't think Francis would help Arthur though. Still, it was very nice of Francis to consider helping Arthur to woo Alfred with Shakespeare sonnets. A job very well done! <3

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fivedayslater February 19 2012, 17:27:19 UTC
You should comment more, I like your comments. :)

Thank you! Francis is a fan of love, even if it's Arthur's, and he told him to play to his strengths, so Arthur did Shakespeare. :Db Thank you!! <3

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kiyomiuchiha February 17 2012, 17:51:55 UTC
I loved this! Leaving the sonnets was so cute! The first one you used is one of my favorites, I loved that you used it as one of the notes.

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fivedayslater February 19 2012, 17:28:11 UTC
Thank you! That's probably my favorite sonnet too, so I just had to use it. :D

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THIS FIC. bibiahlinda February 18 2012, 18:17:26 UTC
Seriously, I loved this fic and the way you wrote it.
I don't know that much about Shakespeare, but then, I just feel for you fic. I take my hat, that was awesome. Continue like that.

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Re: THIS FIC. fivedayslater February 19 2012, 17:29:08 UTC
Thank you! Don't worry, I don't either. XD But I'm glad yu were able to enjoy the fic anyway. I will most certainly try. :Db

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