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challenge ≫ belle vista xenophile part one
Dec 04, 2010 13:44
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challenge: xenophilia
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saveourpeeps
December 4 2010, 16:51:23 UTC
I like how you're turning this into a short narrative - it makes it more interesting to read! Can't wait to see the rest of the adorable alien babies. :D
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fivesims
December 4 2010, 16:55:25 UTC
I thought I might try something new and I'm glad you like it!
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simsinthecity
December 5 2010, 03:21:54 UTC
I also like the story setup :) I'm sure Abel and Leah will both grow up to be adorable, and all their brothers and sisters will, too!
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fivesims
December 6 2010, 10:24:26 UTC
Thanks! I'm new to writing in story style and I'm finding it really enjoyable and challenging.
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radiationpoison
December 5 2010, 04:09:38 UTC
Love the narrative, definitely kept me interested! :3 And I giggle every time I see Marcus' cute little pornstache!
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fivesims
December 6 2010, 10:25:11 UTC
Thank you! I'm enjoying writing this challenge as a story as opposed to my normal style of commentary.
I think I'm addicted to the pornstash!
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boolpropbea
December 5 2010, 05:35:06 UTC
Awww, I loved the story and I can't wait to see the children!
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fivesims
December 6 2010, 10:25:21 UTC
Thank you!
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verpixelt
December 5 2010, 11:50:53 UTC
I fell in love with Mr. Bristow as soon as I saw his moustache! ♥
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fivesims
December 6 2010, 10:25:43 UTC
Haha! I'm a pornstache addict!
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