BBM Fic: Seeing the Possibilities

[fizzerbass]

Title:  Seeing the Possibilities
Author: fizzerbass
Pairing: Jack/Ennis
Rating: G
Notes:  Just came back from the movies and this popped into my head.  Possible spoilers for Star Trek.  Yes, I said Star Trek.

Comments

[enoughtohurt]

(((Susan)))

OMG!!! I am so glad you are back!!!!!

How are you? Hope you are happy and fine, babe.

This was VERY gorgeous. I’ve not seen Star Trek, but at Ennisjack brokies talk about it, and they all think like Jack. LOL!!! Brokies see every possibility out there since BBM....

I don’t like men that smoke....but I have to say that my mouth was hanging open while I was reading about Jack all wicked stealing Ennis cigarette, about them both smoking and snorting a stream of smoke and stuff.....Oh my, I thought it was SEXY!!! Oh well, maybe it’s because your boys are truly yummy. I think these boys could be easily NS universe boys, without sweet Bobby. Maybe he is in a friend’s house?
I also liked a lot the way you describe every move they do, how they walk, how they look for a break in the traffic, how they unlock and lock the doors of the car, etc. It was all so vivid and agile, in constant motion, just like if I were watching a film instead of reading a fic. I COULD SEE IT ALL!!!

I loved this bit so much.

Ennis smiles softly,

[fizzerbass]

Hi, Tammy! I'm glad to be back - although "back" may be stretching it a bit. :) At least I had an original thought and was able to string together more than 100 words to share it with all of you. We'll see if it continues.

I thought about turning this into an NS story but Bobby was too young to see the movie. :)

Glad you liked this, dear friend. And thanks even more for letting me know.

Big hugs,
fizzer

[mrs_spamlad]

Awww! love this :)
and it seems like such a "jack" conversation to have, too.
thanks for sharing!
jill

[fizzerbass]

yeah, this totally seems like a subject Jack would latch on to and beat to death until Ennis took drastic measures to make him hush up. :) Glad you liked it.

[torry28]

Jack, he is such a romantic always seeing love where ever he looks.
Good answer for Ennis though got him out of the doghouse and in to Jacks good graces.
I do so love your one shots.
Thank you.
Love,
Torry

[fizzerbass]

Thanks, Torry. I do so love your comments. :)

[gilli_ann]

Very nice riff on "slash" reverberations through popular culture! K/S opened the gates to so many other pairings, and so indirectly impacted our own J/E stories too; - it make perfect sense that they'd come the full circle in the end and that Jack and Ennis, now knowing all the slash-fictional backstory, would still be right there discussing the slashy possibilities in this new generation's Star Trek.

[fizzerbass]

I always wondered if I was wierd because I always wanted Kirk and Spock to get together when I was reading my father's Star Trek books when I was younger. Now I know I was just ahead of my time. :)

Thanks for reading!

[ramona4jake]

Must Jack be always so passionate about his believes ?! Duh !... I liked Ennis' answer !
Thank you for sharing this sweetness !

[fizzerbass]

I think if you'll look in the dictionary, "passionate" is Jack's middle name. :)

glad you liked this and thanks for letting me know.