Fancy Rained Like Grace; Chapter Four

[salire]

Title: Fancy Rained Like Grace; Chapter Four
Pairings: Jensen/Jared, Drew Nelson/Sandy McCoy, Misha Collins/Rachel Miner
Word Count: 3663
Rating: PG-13, eventual NC-17
Warnings: see masterpost for complete list thus far
Author’s Note: A fill for this prompt on spn_hardcore.
Summary: Orphaned as a child and heatless, therefore mateless, at twenty-seven, Jared has

Comments

[geri]

Damn this just gets better every post seriously i can't wait for the dragon sex between these two asap. Bless my pervy heart. seriously Great update.

[salire]

LOL! bless your pervy heart indeed ♥

thanks very much!

[mangacat201]

EH... and they couldn't have told Jensen that one by messenger? HE's GOT BREEDING TO GET TO AND SOON. ACK. I hope he DOES indeed get to before Jared gives up because noone will approach him.

[salire]

let's hope so~ >:)

[taragreen89]

*looking at Jenson*

get some ;D

And it is totally adorable that Jensen is getting all clucky already imagining J2 baby dragons. And I think that having Jensen not approach Jared and making his interest known before now makes sense as to how you've written his character. Responsibility towards the Flight seems to very important for Dragon!jensen, as well as trying to make things as good for jared as possible given the situation. Jensen doesn't want to hurt Jared, and trying to mate with Jared or even indicating his interest towards Jared before he had a heat could make things very hard for Jared- in Jensen's mind Jared is better off not knowing about how much Jensen wants him unless they are in a position where they could actually mate with each other.

Awesome story- really looking forwards to everything coming up.

[salire]

lol!

i'm so glad you got all of that out of this chapter. this was really meant to establish jensen's motivations and character, and seeing that someone got that is a big relief for me :)

thank you very much!

[roslindi]

Hi, so I just discovered this story, and awesome stories usually intimidate me (lurker that I am) but I just love this story so much and you've clearly put so much effort into it that it would be wrong not to review.

Jensen daydreaming about dragon-domesticity with Jared was incredibly sweet. Especially because Jensen has clearly been patiently waiting for Jared for years, but not pining away for him. Insecure-Jared is a great combination of angst masked with stoicism, it's really easy (and sad) to see how he could feel that way without all the other dragons being able to see what poor self-esteem he has.

The world building is absolutely phenomenal. Love, love, love how the characters come across as people but not humans, if that makes sense.

Anyway, I just wanted to tell you that I love your fic and am eager to read your next update. :)

[salire]

not gonna lie, your comment made me tear up just a little :)

i completely understand what you mean about being people but not humans, because that's exactly what i was going for. the dragons are completely sentient individuals with distinct personalities and places in their society, just like humans. but they live by different codes, laws, social norms, etc. so, yes, i completely understand what you mean, and i'm ecstatic that you get that from my fic.

thank you so much! i'm so glad you like the story ♥

[jacey26]

wonderful, can't wait for more!

[salire]

thank you!