Fancy Rained Like Grace; Chapter Eight

Feb 13, 2012 19:52

Title: Fancy Rained Like Grace; Chapter Eight
Pairings: Jensen/Jared, Drew Nelson/Sandy McCoy, Misha Collins/Rachel Miner
Word Count: 3047
Rating: PG
Beta: lexicale
Warnings: see masterpost for complete list thus far
Author’s Note: A fill for this prompt on spn_hardcore
Summary: Orphaned as a child and heatless, therefore mateless, at twenty-seven, Jared has spent most of ( Read more... )

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meesasometimes February 14 2012, 13:56:58 UTC
this just made my morning...Jared clenching that flower from his nest the whole flight home...ugh

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salire February 14 2012, 17:41:18 UTC
Yeah, he's a very sentimental dragon :)

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malcolm_doyle February 14 2012, 14:38:29 UTC
Typically I just want everything to be happy and amazing right away but this angst here, this quiet pain that Jared is showing is so captivating. I feel so bad for him and the way he's reacting to all this but I'm sure Jensen will get him to open up soon. Really great job here, I'm so excited for where it's going!

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salire February 14 2012, 17:43:11 UTC
Thank you! Glad this kind of angst is working for you :) Usually I'm the same way. I just want everything to be okay and everyone to be in love! But it's always so much more satisfying if it hurts a little first.

Glad you enjoyed ♥

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legion11 February 14 2012, 17:09:28 UTC
Oh no, Jared is going to abandon his treasures, because he feels unworthy! Poor Jared! I´m looking forward to the situation when Jensen find out!(*I´m so going to love upcoming angst*)

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salire February 14 2012, 17:43:57 UTC
Haha, thank you very much!

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meansprite February 14 2012, 21:46:21 UTC
I'm so pleased to see a new chapter. Poor Jared, the doubt over the beauty of his nest, the lack of rivals for Jensen to fight. And his precious trinkets. That he believes how he feels is all so inconsequential. And Jensen doesn't see it.

Wonderful update. :)

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salire February 14 2012, 21:51:41 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it :)

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trickling_sand February 14 2012, 23:25:12 UTC
ooh - welcome back, hun ;)!

This verse has always been a bittersweet tale for me and this part is no exception - Jared's insecurities breaks my heart!! I know he seems understanding of Jensen and his duties as Dominus and that it wasn't his fault that they couldn't stay in their mating nest but I'm not sure if he really believes it.. And he keeps looking down on himself in comparison to Jensen, almost putting the Dominus on a pedestal.. Something's gotta give sooner or later!!

Thanks again for the update, hun - and Happy V'Day ^o^!!
<3

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salire February 14 2012, 23:54:30 UTC
Thanks, bb!

Yeah, they've still got a bunch of issues to work through before the story's over.

Glad you liked it :)

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