Journey of mind and thought

[flame_weaver]

Countless microscopic atoms converged, meshing, melding together in a swirl of electric impulses and traded electrons. They spread thickly and widely through the air, held together by a whim. A sneeze could separate them. But, wait. They do not shift, no more than infinitesimal particles can; instead, they respond. Electrical signals pulse

Comments

Interesting

[anonymous]

Good use of inside/outside perspective. I think you went on too long and then it seemed that you hadn't so maybe it was just a bad transition you did early on. Overall, I think it's a good stab at something though I know not what.

I like it

[fists_of_ice]

Maybe it's just descriptive rambling, maybe you're just testing the confines of your own imagination within the confines of the natural setting