How did I ever fade into this life?

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Eric's head fell against the cool glass of the window in a bedroom a little too big for just one person yet too small for two. It was cold, but this time of year often brought a chill from some place he'd never seen. Somewhere even farther North, where it was even colder, Eric envisioned an army of icicle demons just hurling their frosty forces

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Because it was the season to be jolly

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And it wasn't a very Merry Christmas that year, for many...were killed.

I like the winter scenes. That seems to be in you writing a lot. This one was a little awkward though...feels like you were rusty or tired perhaps. It just seemed like the descriptions were wordy. You had some cool images that didn't need to be weighed down so much. The KISS rule: Keep It Stupidly Simple. Or Simple, Stupid. Or Simply Stupid. Or Super Sayin.

I'd go for the last choice myself.

For there was still much defecating and hurling of presents and yadda yadda yadda

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I like the last one, too. Yeah, I am out of practice. I noticed that too, writing it. But, hey, I'm lazy. So F it, I say.

I'll keep that in mind next time, though.

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I was just thinking it was be funny to add at the end of one of those paragraphs "And then, surprisingly, the world ended."

It'd be a good end to a short story. At least then you'd never have to worry about not finishing it. :P

Dude, I love you

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That would be so funny. I should have done that. I hate writing. Lmao.