Will be posting the second half shortly - I hope you like it...it felt a little strange when I was writing it, but I had this sense that Hotch's feeling are so screwed up, he can't coordinate his thoughts and feelings anymore, and it all just comes out as resentment...if that makes sense! Hope you enjoy the rest :)
It isn't a love story but man it feels real for them. I love that Emily loves broken things and that Hotch doesn't really realize he's broken. Can't wait to read part 2.
Delighted you like it so far! :) Oh, man, the thing that always blows my mind about Hotch and Emily is how they're so similar in many ways, but then there's this chasm of feelings and miscommunication. In my head!canon, they're a couple of broken people, Hotch far more so. I'd love to think that Emily could help him...
I really loved this 1st chapter, I love the fact that Emily kinda "forced" Hotch to share a room with her, I love Hotch trying to keep his distance from her and I love that flashback ;)
The perfectionist in him wanted to repeat it so that he’d be less clumsy and make it more memorable. Loved this line.
Oh, Emily is all business and pushiness...wait until you see part 2! ;) I have to be honest, this fic was partly an excuse for some good old H/P smut and angry!sex :P
Very interesting fic. Hotch is trying not to give in, and Emily... well Emily is soo conscious of the effect she has on Hotch, and really taking advantage of it, in a playfully evil way.
It's great to see another fic from you! I hope more will follow?
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Will be posting the second half shortly - I hope you like it...it felt a little strange when I was writing it, but I had this sense that Hotch's feeling are so screwed up, he can't coordinate his thoughts and feelings anymore, and it all just comes out as resentment...if that makes sense! Hope you enjoy the rest :)
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I really loved this 1st chapter, I love the fact that Emily kinda "forced" Hotch to share a room with her, I love Hotch trying to keep his distance from her and I love that flashback ;)
The perfectionist in him wanted to repeat it so that he’d be less clumsy and make it more memorable. Loved this line.
Can't wait to read more (:
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Oh, Emily is all business and pushiness...wait until you see part 2! ;) I have to be honest, this fic was partly an excuse for some good old H/P smut and angry!sex :P
Thanks, doll! xx
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It's great to see another fic from you! I hope more will follow?
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