Appetite (Chapter 9)

Sep 27, 2008 03:10


Title: Appetite
Main pairing: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic
Other characters: Carlos Moya, Tommy Haas, David Ferrer, Andy Murray
Rating: R (just for a few dialogues)
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Carlos makes a costly mistake back at the hotel while Novak gets cranky and David gets up late in the ( Read more... )

appetite, tennis slash

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carolina30363 September 27 2008, 16:32:20 UTC
awwwwwwwwwwww...I love how you are writing Carlos and Tommy...every single pairing written by you is so original and so well writtem]n...can't wait for more!

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flamyshine September 27 2008, 20:16:43 UTC

That was a long awww :D Ah, it's been a while since I wrote an angsty scene, so I wasn't sure how it turned out. Thanks for the nice comment :) I love adding history to pairings as an attempt to cover my bad writing XD *hugs*

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carolina30363 September 28 2008, 14:43:19 UTC
Yours is a great writing sweetie!
Love your fics!

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flamyshine September 28 2008, 04:25:17 UTC

Yeah, you know me and my rare pairings :) I'd personally consider Ferru/Andy a much stranger pairing than Carlos/Tommy XD

Thanks for reading. And, I always like that icon of yours :D *hugs*

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mysticmass September 28 2008, 04:50:42 UTC
mmm, Nutellaland.......

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flamyshine September 28 2008, 10:10:41 UTC

Yeah, Nutellaland is my secret ideal world XD Thanks for reading :)

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the_limousine September 28 2008, 17:12:08 UTC
-flails arms around- Sorry! I'm so behind with my comments! I'm just having a hard time writing (and i know that sounds like a lie because i posted two different stories in less than 24h, but i swear i'm not lying ! XD) I'll comment on HF as soon as i can!I KNEW IT WAS TOMMY! I mean, i remember he played him in um...was it Toronto or Cincy? Well, i know that he played him in either of those two places and since Carlos didn't talk to him for 6 years, i guessed that it couldn't be a player that was in his early twenties (though...why not? -rubs chin-) sooo...it had to be Tommy! (Lol, aren't my detective skills just amazing? XD ( ... )

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flamyshine September 29 2008, 17:28:24 UTC
(Aww, sweetie, it's perfectly okay even if you don't comment on every single chapter :) I know you're reading, so it's fine *hugs ( ... )

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