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flamyshine

Appetite (Chapter 11)

Oct 09, 2008 21:16

Title: Appetite
Main pairing: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic
Other characters: Ferrer, A.Murray, Moya, Ferrero
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Novak checks Andy's reaction to his practice with David while an angry Carlos goes to see Juan Carlos. Novak gets cranky over the "No sex" rule while ( Read more... )

appetite, tennis slash

Comments 12

carolina30363 October 9 2008, 16:57:11 UTC

This fic is going to become on of my fav ever...I love how you wrote all the characters and I found amazing Andy's mum too...and Andy talking of his ex lover was just so cute!

Great job

flamyshine October 10 2008, 09:41:49 UTC

Aww, isn't that just so sweet :) Judy's pretty amazing in real life so I thought she would be very supportive of Andy (except for his hair, maybe XD).

Thank you so much for reading. You always leave me very kind, soothing words :)

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flamyshine October 10 2008, 09:44:08 UTC

Oh, well, I was wondering if I made Ferru too young in here, then thought, oh wait, Carlos acts even more like a child XD Novak's sexual frustration will be all gone in the next chapter which means that I'll have a hard time writing it XD Thanks for reading and I still can't believe you ended Rockstar like that *sobs*

jeu_set_match October 11 2008, 02:29:56 UTC

I'm SO glad Andy liked Pics that much. I must admit I was a little scared because, you know, Andy could have really played hard to get or pretend that David isn't completely adorable. But then I'd have been really angry, because NO ONE breaks Pics' heart. No one. Andy's phone conversation with Nole was really sweet, and one could really feel their friendship. You wrote it very well. I like the comparison between David ans Tim, it sure will change Andy's life for good. And their nicknames are really greatXD ( ... )

jeu_set_match October 11 2008, 03:05:51 UTC

I WROTE "PICS" 10 TIMES.
IN LESS THAN 20 SENTENCES.

flamyshine October 13 2008, 21:03:09 UTC

First of all, please forgive me for replying so late. You already know why but yes, I've been so sick *sobs* But it's great to have the honour to even reply to such a lovely review. I can't thank you enough ^________________________ ( ... )

gravyholic October 12 2008, 13:13:16 UTC

“Bye, spiky.”

“Bye, biggy.”

lol that made me snort so hard!
great writing again!

flamyshine October 13 2008, 20:35:57 UTC

I don't know if those nicknames suit them but I couldn't come up with anything else than their hair XD Thanks for the nice words :)

slyreflection October 16 2008, 03:00:01 UTC

Aww, Ferru. XD Hee, he's so... well, everything Brit!Andy said. Open and fun and crazy and- dramatically examining Andy's back ROFL! It's adorable and I'm glad they are getting along well.
And, more later, but biggy and spiky AHAHAHAHA. I saw that vid again were Novak pretends to steal Andy's trophy and it really is hilariously cute.
Heh heh, Juanqui sure knows how to grovel endearingly... of course once he's sure he's not in danger of being killed he has no problem being blunt, making threats, and continuing to matchmake. XD Ah, Juanqui rocks. Listen to him Carlos he's right! *Nervously hopeful*
Yeah, two twenty-1/2 year olds, I think its really only Rafael's bull-like determination thats kept them from completely DEMOLISHING that rule before this LMAO. This line killed me laughing: “Yes, I wish Roger would’ve told me that I had to sacrifice more sex.” Psst, thats because part of Roger's success WAS the more sex, not the sacrifice or it. XD XD XDAwww, Ferru is sitting in Brit!Andy's (I'm never going to break that habit at this rate ( ... )

flamyshine October 16 2008, 07:16:48 UTC

You know, Jeu asked me if I had a hat with all the players' names in it and if I just randomly picked two out of it XD That's what she thought I was doing when I wrote Ferru/Andy XD But interestingly, I'm enjoying writing about that weird pairing and honestly, I don't even remember how I got to write about them ( ... )

slyreflection October 17 2008, 01:05:17 UTC

I was suprised by the Ferru/Brit!Andy pairing as well but its really working for me. Well, it sort of made sense in the context of the time because you were looking for a boyfriend of Ferru and Im assuming you were planing to write Brit!Andy into the story already from the Novak angle...
Juanqui just knows how to deal with everyone. I mean, he even deals with Marat well. That's like, the ultimate sign of mastery XD ( ... )

flamyshine October 17 2008, 17:34:58 UTC

Of course, there should be some Marat/JC blood-drinking in that crossover fic. Boy, you really had a lot of ideas, didn't you? XD I'm sorry it messed with your HW. I loled so much at the "vodka-flavored" Marat blood. Sure, no surprise there XDDD

You're right. Finishing the series is my utmost priority. And, that idea about Nole's appetite, that's very clever XD He will not only lose his appetite but also lose his mind, I guess XD Thanks for the ideas and laughs. What am I going to do without you?^_^ *superhugs*