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flamyshine

Appetite (Chapter 13)

Oct 25, 2008 16:17

Title: Appetite
Main pairings: Rafael Nadal/Novak Djokovic, David Ferrer/Andy Murray
Other characters: Moya, Haas, Kohlschreiber, Tursunov, Ferrero
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Carlos pays Tommy a visit while David and Andy enjoy their date. Novak has a lot of questions for his ( Read more... )

appetite, tennis slash

Comments 11

carolina30363 October 25 2008, 12:06:12 UTC

I really love the development of this...I hope Carlos and Tommy will find a way to stay together and your Ferru is the cutest thing ever...loving this

flamyshine October 25 2008, 12:14:56 UTC

Whoa, that was fast :D Quick comments always make me breathe better, hehe *superhugs* And, you always give me such nice comments that I'm so thankful of them :) Thank you!!

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flamyshine October 25 2008, 16:26:23 UTC

Wow, that's like the biggest Awww I've ever had! :D And, you used one of my favorite icons. That Roger is just purely elegant. A big awww for him too *hugs him*

Thanks for all the awws up there. I could go swim in it *superhugs*

pretty_panther October 25 2008, 22:04:23 UTC

I love all the stories in this fic! Andy/ferru is so sweet!! Me loves. I will be amused by any Scottish Ferru attemps, cos I am Socttish, so it will amke me giggle lol

Loved it. Looking forward to more

flamyshine October 26 2008, 07:27:10 UTC

Oh my dear god! I had no idea you were Scottish! I must've embarrassed myself XD I found on the Internet that we could use the word "braw" for "It's a braw day" etc, but wasn't sure if we could also use it to describe people XD Sorry, if I wrote that part wrong.

I'm definitely going to make Ferru speak more Scottish, then, hehe. Thanks for the lovely comment :)

pretty_panther October 26 2008, 11:04:41 UTC

You didn't embarrass yourself! Honest! It was really cute and it was all right. In some parts of Scotland people use braw to describe people so it's all good.

Your welcome. xxx looking forward to more xx

slyreflection October 26 2008, 02:07:16 UTC

...
I have to day I still think Dima/Igor is hotter. Just cause we have a kiss. XD But anyway...
CARLOS/TOMMY <3 <3 <3 :D. Ohh, that scene was written so well, it incorporated so many things but everything fit so nicely. :) Im so glad Tommy finally came out and said he still had feelings for Carlos (okay, he said he was hot, but still, the romance!) and asking for his shirt hee! SO glad Carlos is taking care of Tommy...Awwww cuddling in bed... hopefully Carlos won't get sick... but it'll be worth it either way... AHAHAHAHA AWESOMEST LINES:
“Carlos was in bed and Tommy was asleep.”
“With clothes or without clothes?”
Philipp frowned. “Of course, with clothes.”
“Ah, too bad. Well, Tommy must’ve been really sick. Anyway, thanks. You’ll go to Heaven someday. Bye!”
Philipp looked down at his cell phone and shrugged. He had never really understood how Spanish minds worked anyway.XD XD XD ( ... )

flamyshine October 26 2008, 07:36:57 UTC

Of course you'd think Dima/Igor is hotter XD No surprise there. And you're right. No other pairing has a real kiss. I'm still amazed how that happened *giggles ( ... )

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flamyshine October 26 2008, 07:38:49 UTC

XD Okay, I had just told gordos that her AWW was the biggest Aww I've ever seen, but it seems like that's not true anymore! *gasps*

This really must be the biggest, loudest AWW ever! :D I love it when you go all "one, two, three" XD Somehow it makes me giggle. Thanks for sharing your awesome awws. I could have a nice time with them XD *superhugs*