ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 21)

Sep 01, 2009 18:28


Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairings: Djokovic/A. Murray, Gasquet/Gulbis, Federer/Roddick
Other characters: Cilic
Rating: G
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Richard pays Ernests a visit while Novak gets to nurse a new cold patient. Roger feels helpless ( Read more... )

tennis slash, atp kindergarten

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flamyshine September 2 2009, 17:54:22 UTC

Ahaha, yeah, smart!Marin isn't too fond of table tennis. Great that he's good at normal(?) tennis =D

I wish Ernie could step up and earn some cookies by himself XD If ATP gave out cookies to players, do you think he would've been ranked higher by now? XD

I love every single moment writing about Roger and Richie. It's probably my favorite scene to write in this story. Thank you so much for the constant comments. They're very helpful. Thank you :)

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flamyshine September 2 2009, 18:02:56 UTC

Aww, I'm glad you enjoy reading about Richie and Ernie =D Thanks for letting me know :) And, yeah, nothing's better than some yummy cookies to make you feel better XD As you said, I'd like to believe Ernie wasn't being TOO selfish for not giving Richie more cookies. He just has larger bones than him!

Ahaha, that "nurse Nole" was an homage to your doctor!AU. For some reason, I've been putting little homage details in the story since last chapter. This time, it was yours XD Yeah, he had nursing practice when he was a kid before he got to work in your hospital XD

Yep, hard times for Richie. I can't believe I'm going to write about Mirka at some point, lol. Thanks for reading =D *superhugs*

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speaking_red September 2 2009, 14:46:34 UTC
Flamy, you made me wanna hug Richie and Ernie again and again! They're soooo cute together.
And the special cookies! Oh Richie, don't feel any hurt! Ernie wouldn't give one and a half if you were someone else!

Nole nursing Marin! Ahhh, poor Marin, he won't get any quiet rest as long as Nole is in the same room, no? AND have I told you that I thought Marin would like Juma in the begining? Juma would't be awake enough to make to much noise, no?

Ahhh, I want more Rafa/Juma scene but you know what, I love any other of your boys as well.♥

*hugs*

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flamyshine September 2 2009, 18:16:31 UTC

Aww, I love writing about baby Richie/Ernie so much. I'm thrilled to know that other people are willing to take the time to read about them =D Ahaha, you're right. If it wasn't Richie, Ernie probably wouldn't have even offered half a cookie XD

Hmm, yeah, Juma could've been a quiet roommate for Marin but then, I'm not sure if Marin has the patience to wake Juma up every single morning XD Let's hope Rafa's patience won't run out any time soon!

Ahaha, I have so many characters in this story that sometimes I feel like I'm not writing enough for any of them. I guess that's why this story will be as long as thirty five~forty chapters XD (I hope your patience won't run out too! XD) Thanks for the lovely comment *hugs*

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speaking_red September 4 2009, 12:25:43 UTC
Hmm, I guess you're right, waking Juma up every single morning demands a huge responsibility XD

Waaa! Twenty more chapters! Now I wanna hug YOU again and again, Flamy!
Ahahaha, my patience run out? It's never gonna happen! As long as you're willing to write, I'll definitely comment. ♥

*hugs*

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slyreflection September 2 2009, 20:05:33 UTC
Ah, I'll need new words for "cute" and "SUPER-MEGA CUTE" before this series is over, Flamy, AWWWWWWWW RICHIE AND ERNIE <3.
Spiderman pancake bed sheets XD. Sometimes I wonder how your mind works lolololol. HEH, OF COURSE ERNIE TALKS FOR TIM'S COOKIES XD XD XD. *Huggles them*

Ahaha, is this the first time Marin acted like the younger one since he moved in with Novak? Awwww... the thermometer XD... oh NO, .1 more!!!!

*SUPERHUGS* Soooooooo adorable Flamy. <3

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flamyshine September 3 2009, 13:54:55 UTC

LOL, it certainly means a lot that YOU wonder how my mind works XDD And, yep, I guess cookies are meant to save you when you really feel blue XD

Hmm, I think it's the first time Marin behaved like a four year old XD I hope his parents didn't hide his real age D:

Oh, when you went 'oh no! .1 more!', I realized I didn't even think of Farenheit while writing that part XD Well, obviously, 37.4 was in centigrade.

Ah, it's clearly not the best day to reply. Sorry about that. But thank you so much for such lively reaction to the story, haha. Thank you =D *superhugs*

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krisherdown September 3 2009, 15:47:04 UTC
Aww, how cute is Richie in trying to get Ernie better. Of course Tim's cookies solve all problems :)

Poor Marin. Not sure which is worse: Nurse Nole or Singing Nole.

Sweet moment at the end with father and son.

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flamyshine September 3 2009, 17:16:21 UTC

(Aww, I really love your hair scratching!Rog icon XD)

Thanks to all this writing about cookies, I feel like having some myself XD Mine don't even have to be special. I just want one, haha.

At least, nurse Nole got the job done, feeding Marin the syrup and checking the temperature. Not sure if the same thing can be said about singing Nole XD

Thank you so much for the lovely comment =D

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