ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 24)

Nov 19, 2009 03:07


Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairings: Djokovic/A. Murray, Gasquet/Gulbis, Nadal/Del Potro, Federer/Roddick
Other characters: Cilic, Querrey, J. Murray, Monfils
Rating: PG
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Novak and Andy help their friends to understand ( Read more... )

tennis slash, atp kindergarten

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mtmed9273 November 19 2009, 11:35:08 UTC
awww...great ;

I love Marat/Roger ;)

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flamyshine November 19 2009, 17:03:31 UTC

Thank you for the kind words :) Ah, too bad Marat/Roger happened in the past! Oh well, I like to write them tease each other or argue like that XD

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flamyshine November 19 2009, 20:14:14 UTC

Hmm, I haven't really thought about the winners yet. Juma/Rafa would have to beat Jamie's team in the final then!

I'm sure Ernie will do everything to win that big box of special cookies XD And, for Marin, oh well, he won't get to play doubles with Jeremy but could help him out with his leg =D

Yep, my beloved Carlos will soon be in the story. God, I've been dying to write him :)

Thanks for the support. How grateful I am to have such a lovely reader like you *hugs*

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krisherdown November 19 2009, 21:11:05 UTC
Poor Marin going through all that trouble (and Ernie unwittingly insulting him) and no Jeremy. Too bad.

It is wrong but I love how you're torturing/confusing Richie. But having Marat around to annoy Roger (as well as the Hawkeye memory) could be delish.

My favorite part was Novak and Andy trying to get Rafa and Juma to kiss. Can't wait to see what's next.

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flamyshine November 20 2009, 03:53:27 UTC

Yeah, who said Marin's life would be easier than the others even though he's smarter than all of them? XD Poor thing! Now I'll have to write about Jeremy hopping to school with one leg.

I didn't know what to put for the rating, thanks to the Richie part XD It clearly didn't feel like G so I just put PG.

It wouldn't be Novak and Andy if they didn't act all nosy about other people's love business XD Thank you so much for the comment :)

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speaking_red November 20 2009, 05:20:08 UTC
Aww, Nole the stylist! He's really a good roommate :D
Love the 'unmarinish' Marin, so cute ♥

“It looks better than what Jamie did to Coach Roger.”
Hahaha Ernie, I believe you but this doesn't sound so encouraging, no?

With a curious six-year-old around, Roger/Randy must be more careful, kids grow up so fast!

And Mandy is the master of making things up! I like the sound of "super boyfriends" too!

Yay! Rafa/Juma playing doubles together, great!
They need to practise so they'll spending more time with each other, no?
Maybe they can practise kissing too when when nobodys around XDDD

Can't wait to see Carlos! *superhugs*

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flamyshine November 20 2009, 08:14:35 UTC

Marin would have to try the new hair style once more when Jeremy comes to school XD I hope the French boy will find him cute or I don't want to think about how Marin will treat his roommate XD

I fear that Roger will get to face many difficult questions from his own son! He should be glad that Richie will soon be very busy with the tournament coming up XD

Ah, I felt that making Juma/Rafa play doubles was the fastest way to bring them together. And, of course, they could use time to practice how to kiss as well =D

Thank you so much for your constant support :) Thanks *superhugs*

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flamyshine November 24 2009, 16:36:33 UTC

Don't worry about late comments or even not commenting! I know you're still reading and I'm very grateful for it :)

Ahaha, I had quite some trouble with the confused Richie scene. I had to rewrite it three times and I'm still not happy about it but oh well, it's not like I could rewrite it again so I'll have to live with it XD

And, OF COURSE you meant Richie sleeping with Ernie in an innocent way! XD I expect the rating of the comments to be G~PG too! (Why am I yelling XD)

Yeah, the thing with Roger's enthusiastic boyfriend is that he gets to nap and rest throughout the day while Roger still has an everyday job and a kid to raise. I'm hoping Randy will get to help him out with the chores soon enough XD

Thanks for the sublime (this word suddenly popped into my head XD) comment! *superhugs*

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