ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 27)

Jan 06, 2010 09:01


Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairings: Djokovic/A. Murray, Gasquet/Gulbis, Nadal/Del Potro, Federer/Roddick
Other characters: Moya, Henman, Ferrero, Cilic, Chardy, Monfils, Wawrinka, Vavrinec
Rating: G
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: The winter tournament ( Read more... )

tennis slash, atp kindergarten

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speaking_red January 6 2010, 11:15:51 UTC
Awww, Juma pretending to be asleep is just way too adorable! Rafa, you're a very lucky boy =D

Asking for good morning kisses, that's so different from the shy!Juma who can't holding Rafa's hand without blushing, he's really grown up ♥♥♥♥

Rafa, don't be so worried about Juma growing up and don't need you to wake him up. Juma's acting just prove that he enjoyed the waking up section too, no?

Hahaha, it seems that Roger will be haunted by Randy's cookies for a long time XD

Can't wait for the next chapter *superhugs*

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flamyshine January 6 2010, 21:39:00 UTC

Well, Rafa was boyfriendless for the first two years in school, so yeah, it must be nice to finally (lol, he's only six) find someone special. I'm already heading for chapter 30 so I figured I could pick up the pace and show some change in the youngest boys' characters. After all, kids grow up so quickly!

Yeah, Roger might need a shrink if Randy dare tries to bake again XD Who said it was easy to be a dad? XDD

Thanks for the encouraging words. You have no idea how much I appreciate them =D *superhugs*

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forest_sunset January 6 2010, 14:23:31 UTC
Oh Mirka with Stanny??? So cute, and too bad stanny didn't start on the right foot with Richard and it was funny that he had to ask advice from randy. It was very impressive how much Randy had spoilt that kid "I shed a tear when the card bill arrived......".
Loved this cute chapter.

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flamyshine January 6 2010, 21:40:38 UTC

I don't know if anyone in the real world calls Stan "Stanny" but I found it cute to use it in the story XD Well, he could always try to find other ways to impress Richard. I don't want all the big boys to cry because of card bills XD We'll see!

Thank you very much for the kind words. They're really appreciated =D

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flamyshine January 7 2010, 09:44:12 UTC

I have another chapter for the winter tournament. Thought about using three chapters on it but I still have a long way ahead so changed my mind to two XD

I bet not too many boys are sure about their relationship status unless you're Nole and Mandy XD They're still babies!

Isn't Randy really nice for telling Stan his secret? Ahaha, he even shared his painful experience about card bills. I hope Stan appreciated the advice even if he was shocked!

Richie's such a busy boy with all the people around him. I'm glad the real version of him is back on tour and I feel inspired thanks to him already :)

Thanks for the constant support. It's always very much appreciated *superhugs*

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krisherdown January 6 2010, 23:52:38 UTC
Love the tension between Richie and Stanny.

Juma is growing up - and a smart kid at that, tricking Rafa.

Oh and this line: Tim cries less, Dima stopped putting nasty stuff in my coffee, and surprisingly, Marat’s behaving better than the boys for once.

Well done.

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flamyshine January 7 2010, 09:27:06 UTC

At first, I thought of pairing Mirka with Mike Bryan, but then it occured to me that Stan might be a better (or should I say, a slightly more plausible) match XD

Yep, Juma's growing up. Kids grow up so quickly! Too bad Rafa didn't fall for the trick but they're still willing to go along with the act, so I guess it's fine XD

Thanks for reading! I'm looking forward to having a better update schedule this year :)

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slyreflection January 7 2010, 00:46:56 UTC
YAY ATPK! :D Awww, it's beyond adorable how Juma can't help going around and telling everyone about his lovely morning with his boyfriend(!!!) Rafa XD. Rafa, dear, you're both growing up and changing, but that doesn't mean you need to give your classmates heartattacks by skipping down the hallways LOL. Also, The conversation between Richie-Rafa and then Roger-Carlos? Priceless.
Shy Ernie is even cuter than usual, how is this possible? XD
Ehehehehe Stan is Mirka's new boyfriend; potentially awkward but like A-Rod said, he can always get in Richie's good graces by emptying his bank account roflmao. I love how Mirka has to laugh at Richie totally shutting down all of 'Stanny''s suggestions.
AND OMO JUANQUI! POSSIBLE OTP! <3 Hee, his response to Carlos, "Haha, well, Tim cries less, Dima stopped putting nasty stuff in my coffee, and surprisingly, Marat’s behaving better than the boys for once." is EPIC. It must feel great to complain to another adult after taking care of all those actual kids and then his coworkers who act like kids as ( ... )

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flamyshine January 7 2010, 10:26:54 UTC
Aww, it's so nice to get a comment from you again =D I've missed you ( ... )

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