ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 31)

Feb 08, 2010 20:20


Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairing: Andy Roddick/Roger Federer
Other character: Richard Gasquet
Rating: G
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence, angst
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
Summary: Richard has trouble falling asleep and wanders out of his bedroom.
Author's note: Betaed by the awesome crystaleyesd as ( Read more... )

tennis slash, atp kindergarten

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forest_sunset February 8 2010, 22:24:33 UTC
Awwww, what a lovely chapter. i have tears in my eyes.
Just came back from a one month absence and caught with your Kindergarden's last 3 chapters. They are all jems and I enjoyed reading them emensely.
These two naughty boys will have to be more careful with an innocent 6 year old around the house.

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flamyshine February 9 2010, 02:08:08 UTC

Ahaha, that also means that I only wrote 3 chapters in a month. Geez, I should update more often! Now that Roger even had to cry, I hope he really does something about that bedroom of his. I intend not to write such a scene anymore, so we'll see what he does XD

I really appreciate your lovely words. It's your kind words that are true gems :) Thank you so much!

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slyreflection February 8 2010, 23:33:19 UTC
Ahahahahaha oh lololololololol. A-Rod. XD
First spending so much in hiw new relationship(s) that he has to strong-arm Tim into giving him a permanent job, and now this XD. You know I have no problem reading, well, pretty much anything usually, but I was totally dying inside as I was reading to Richie listening to, er, Roger/Andy's activities.
Also, you made me want omelettes.

Hyper!Gael awwww. Why is Tim always more excited than the boys about the new toys lmao? Ahhhh, loved the line about Juanqui's expression and the dropshots XD. Lol, I don't think Marat's tactics are working so far but Juanqui is having a lot of fun regardless XD.
Andy and Marat are not a peaceful combination, but by this time at least A-Rod should know Marat's not looking to get Roger back. Finally XD.
*Superhugs!*

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flamyshine February 9 2010, 02:18:42 UTC

Lol, I had fun writing down Randy's expenses. Given how there were adult material, maybe I should've put PG for rating. By the way, he's lucky that Tim hired him as whatever a school manager is. If he gets into another fight with Marat, Tim will probably fire them both!

OMG, I actually asked my beta-reader if I'd go to hell for putting Richie in such a position and she just laughed, but I KNEW someone would trouble reading it! If you couldn't read it with ease, who could've! No more Richie overhearing "activities" XD

Yep, Tim is always giddier about new stuff in school. I bet he even tries out the swing in the playground when all the boys in the dorm are asleep XD And, I'm glad you liked the dropshot lines XD I was cruel to Marat (for the nth time in this tennisfic world), but yeah, as you said, Juanqui is strangely having fun XD

If I may tell you, there will be another battle between Marat and Randy shortly. After all, kindergartens are always full of drama XD *superhugs*

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krisherdown February 8 2010, 23:52:19 UTC
Okay, just got back to read the second one. I felt so bad for Roger in this update. Nobody wants to see their child react the way Richie did.

Forgot to mention in my other comment about Juanqui, Marat and the drop shots. That was too funny how Marat's plan to impress backfired.

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flamyshine February 9 2010, 02:22:15 UTC

I had to push Roger so that he would do something about getting sound-proof stuff for his bedroom. I'll deal with that issue in the next next chapter, hopefully. I'm sorry, Rog! XD

Ahaha, as Sly pointed out, even though it wasn't exactly how Marat had planned, Juanqui still got to laugh. I guess the problem was that he laughed AT him, not WITH him XD

Thank you very much for the comments! I always look forward to reading them :)

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knitcole22 February 9 2010, 00:12:40 UTC
aww, this chapter made me a little misty. I'm glad everyone loves everyone and no one's scared anymore :D

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flamyshine February 9 2010, 02:23:28 UTC

Awww, but yeah, everybody's fine now! Hopefully, Roger and Andy learnt a lesson and will spend money on making sure such a thing doesn't happen again XD

Thanks for the lovely comments :)

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flamyshine February 9 2010, 02:29:45 UTC

Oh Gordie, nice to see you here at least! *hugs* Sly says she was dying inside while Richie listened to all that XD When I manage to surprise Sly, that's bad XD I'm glad you laughed though!

Yep, I had to urge Roger to prevent such situations from repeating themselves. Eventually, he and his hot boyfriend will run out of luck and there will be consequences! Better do something now than after Richie really gets shocked.

Ahaha, yeah, I feel for your boys, but I'm not sure if mine are doing any better. I'm determined to finish this series by next month, but then, I wanted to end it last year, so who knows how long it's going to be. Thanks for encouraging me. It never fails to make me feel better *superhugs*

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