ATP Kindergarten (Chapter 33)

Mar 03, 2010 06:21


Title: ATP Kindergarten
Main pairings: Djokovic/A. Murray, Gasquet/Gulbis, Nadal/Del Potro, Federer/Roddick
Other characters: Ancic, Cilic, Henman, Safin, Ferrero, Tursunov, J. Murray, Monfils, Chardy, Moya, Ljubicic
Rating: G
Warning: Possible destruction of innocence
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the characters and this is a fiction.
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tennis slash, atp kindergarten

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krisherdown March 4 2010, 19:28:18 UTC
Marat in the Tweety shirt is too funny an image - although Juanqui having that shirt is equally funny, as is Andy's thoughts on the matter.

Marin should be glad Juan Carlos stopped him from saying 'dad'. There would have been a classroom of kids ready to pounce, as well as the Ernie with his dad issue. That said, Marin's parents' reaction to the phone call had me ROFL.

The letters were so sweet. Novak and Marin and the tape sounds like fun. I can just imagine the fighting that occured over that lego hospital :) Merry Christmas for Mario indeed. Well done.

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flamyshine March 5 2010, 11:01:41 UTC

I don't know if Juanqui has a Tweety shirt irl but he definitely owns a stuffed Tweety! I remember seeing a pic of him lying on the bed with quite a big Tweety! XD

Yeah, you don't want to mess with kids who are strong believers of Santa. Poor Marin's parents XD Well, I'm sure there are more pros than cons of being parents of a smart kid.

I just love writing about text messages, notes and letters. I had a good time imagining Nole singing loudly with Marin having no other choice to chorus in the back, haha. Thank you so much for your time and effort to leave me a comment. Thank you =D

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slyreflection March 4 2010, 22:00:57 UTC
OMO BAHAMAS. Ahahaha it's not my fault okay, you can always have them have a nice talk on the plane and then they can just have a good vacation you don't need to describe in the Bahamas XD. Where Juanqui can get tan lolololololololol.
Tiny Tweety shirt ehehehehe, some Marat abs yes please XD.
Awwwwwwwww, I love smart Marin so much. <3 <3 <3
*superhugs!*

(Sorry for the short comments, they'll be better!)

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flamyshine March 5 2010, 11:20:10 UTC

Ahaha, I have to write their POVs about each other since I've deliberately skipped that part till now. Don't laugh. Juanqui desperately needed a tan XDD Glad that Marat finally got something out of it.

Marin is one of my favorite characters to write in here. He looks quite serious on court irl too XD By the way, I adore all comments. You know that XD I'm happy that you made the time to even read *superhugs*

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flamyshine March 5 2010, 11:26:38 UTC

Juanqui always enjoys torturing Marat (in any of my fics XD. Possibly the same irl too, but I wouldn't know!) Now I have to look up info about the Bahamas. I don't know a single thing about that place XD (Can't get worse than searching info for crocs though.)

You'll get to read about who won the bet, but I guess we can already make a good guess XD Marin still has sides that are his own age, so hopefully, his teachers can help him keep those features.

What! How did you know Roger was going to win? XD I'm too predictable! Poor Randy is suddenly working so much. Who said loving someone was easy? XD

Ah, I'm so glad you found the Santa!boys cute =D That was a scene I've really wanted to write and even though it was short, I was happy to finally write it.

Thanks for having such incredible patience to keep reading and commenting XD *hugs*

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flamyshine March 6 2010, 10:14:19 UTC

Aww, I'm so glad you liked the end XD I hope Mario enjoyed Nole's enthusiastic carols XD The debate about Santa was actually something similar to what had happened in my friend's classroom. She works as a school teacher and I couldn't miss the opportunity to use that cute incident :) Thank you so much for taking the time to comment *hugs*

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speaking_red March 23 2010, 14:37:04 UTC
Yay! Long chapters! ♥

Oh Marat ,you should be nice to Randy, it was Randy who give you the chance to waer Juan Carlos' Tweety T-shirt!
"What happened to your shirt? You've never looked better."
My favourite line of this chapter XDDD

Hmmm Carlos, since the clay season haven't started yet, losing by a few votes isn't that bad, no? *pats*

Can't wait to see the next chapter! *superhugs*

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flamyshine March 23 2010, 17:35:22 UTC

Ahaha, even though you're right, I have a hard time imagining Marat being nice to Randy. If he does, Randy might just think that he's up to some vicious plan XD

Well, Roger does have a very dry sense of humor in real life so I'm glad you enjoyed his lines here XD

Speaking of Carlos and the clay season, I can't believe I spent 33 chapters and I'm no where near the clay season. Well, I'll probably skip time after one more chapter (which will feature Carlos-Rafa-Juma), so hopefully, Carlos will get to coach in good time :)

Thanks for the generous comments! *superhugs*

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